Band 4.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 4.0 · Cambridge IELTS 16 · 2026-08-22
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 4.0)
It is oftenly beliieve that whether interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in plays a crucial role in modren society because this reason how to build with structure by Arctech and symbals, and some peole research the house in internet , social media .
On the one hand , there are several reasons why people support interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in because people see house for live in . How to builing by Arctech the the house and how structure build and some symobals . For example in Japan all most live in rent houses and fond diffrent quiltys like structure ,some symobals and look build .
On the other hand , some people firstly found designs in internet and help arctech builders and artificial intelligences used . How to buiding the house researching all quiltys for internet . But many people use help intelligence like google , chatgpt , gemini many tools . For example in japan houses is shot and expencive .
In conclusion , although both sides have arguments, beacausesome peole research the house in internet , social media . and this reason how to build with structure by Arctech and symbals. While , the more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 4.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 4.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 4.0 |
| Overall | 4.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
The response fails to fully address the prompt. While it mentions reasons for researching house history and methods of research, the ideas are underdeveloped and often incoherent. The essay does not present a clear position, and the content is repetitive and lacks logical depth. Furthermore, the response is under the 250-word minimum requirement, which significantly impacts the score as the task is not fully completed. The arguments regarding architecture and technology are vague and do not directly answer the 'why' or 'how' in a meaningful way.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 4.0
The essay lacks a logical progression of ideas. While there are paragraph breaks, the internal structure of each paragraph is disjointed. Cohesive devices are either missing or used incorrectly, such as the repetitive use of 'how to build' and 'because'. The conclusion does not summarize the main points but rather repeats the confusing phrasing from the introduction. The lack of clear transitions between sentences makes it difficult for the reader to follow the writer's train of thought.
Lexical Resource — Band 4.0
The vocabulary is very limited and often inaccurate, which frequently impedes communication. There are numerous spelling errors (e.g., 'oftenly', 'beliieve', 'modren', 'Arctech', 'symbals', 'quiltys', 'expencive'). The range of vocabulary is insufficient to express complex ideas, relying on basic words and incorrect collocations. The writer struggles to use technical terms related to architecture or research, leading to confusion for the reader.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 4.0
The grammatical control is weak. The essay contains frequent errors in sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Almost every sentence contains a significant error, such as 'It is oftenly beliieve that whether interested in finding out...' and 'How to builing by Arctech the the house'. There is a lack of complex sentence structures, and the simple sentences attempted are often grammatically incorrect. These errors make the text very difficult to read and understand.
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