Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-19
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter
- explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
- say what else you could do for the family
- give your reasons for wanting the job
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................. ,
Student answer (Band 7.5)
Dear Sir/Madam,
As I was flicking the pages of an esteemed daily, I learned about a Hindi teaching job from an advertisement. I would like to submit my application for this position.
Hindi is my native language and I have been speaking Hindi from last 30 years. Moreover, I have more than 5 years of teaching experience and I have trained myriad students of various age groups and countries. I also won the best faculty award at my previous workplace for significantly improving reading, writing and speaking abilities of the learners.
Furthermore, since I have a pretty good knowledge of maths and science, I can help your children in their homework. Moreover, I was a national level badminton player in India, I can teach them some outdoor activities in a fun and engaging way which will have a positive effect on their physical and mental health.
As I am moving to Australia for my masters program, getting this job will help me perfectly understand the Australian culture. Additionally, I will be able to earn some money to manage my expenses. It will also be beneficial for my future job hunting process as most of the companies ask for regional work experience to prove the adaptability in local companies.
Hoping to hear back soon.
Yours faithfully,
Achin Pal
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 8.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 8.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.0 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 8.0
The letter successfully addresses all three bullet points in the prompt. You clearly explain your suitability by highlighting your native language proficiency and teaching experience. You also offer additional help with homework and sports, and provide logical reasons for wanting the job, such as cultural immersion and financial support. The tone is appropriate for a formal letter to a family. The ideas are well-developed and relevant, and the purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning. You have fully satisfied the requirements of the task.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 8.0
The letter is well-organized with a clear logical progression. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the prompt, and the use of cohesive devices such as 'Moreover', 'Furthermore', and 'Additionally' helps to link ideas smoothly. The paragraphing is appropriate, and the introduction and conclusion are well-structured. The flow of information is natural, and the relationship between ideas is easy to follow throughout the text. There is no evidence of mechanical or repetitive use of linking words, and the overall structure is coherent.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.5
You demonstrate a good range of vocabulary, such as 'esteemed daily', 'myriad', and 'adaptability'. The word choice is generally precise and appropriate for the context. There are no significant spelling errors, and the language used is natural. While some phrases are standard, you successfully incorporate less common items to enhance the quality of your writing. The vocabulary is sufficient to convey your meaning clearly and effectively without any confusion or ambiguity.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.0
You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures effectively. Most sentences are error-free, and your control over grammar and punctuation is strong. There is a minor error in the phrase 'speaking Hindi from last 30 years', which should be 'for the last 30 years'. Additionally, there is a minor punctuation issue in the third paragraph where a comma splice occurs: '...badminton player in India, I can teach...'. Despite these minor slips, the majority of your sentences are accurate, and your grammatical control is consistent throughout the letter.
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