Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-21
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
- describe some possible disadvantages
- say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Student answer (Band 7.5)
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well. I'm excited to hear that you've decided to go on a camping holiday. It offers a completely different experience compared to a normal holiday.
Since you're always used to going on beach or shopping holidays, a camping holiday will give you a totally different vibe, especially as you'll be going with your parents and relatives. As you like building small things at home, such as a dog shelter, you might also find it interesting to set up your own tent.
In addition to the enjoyment, there are a few drawbacks to a camping holiday, such as limited access to medical treatment. Therefore, always make sure that your campsite is safe and free from snakes or rodents. It would also be a good idea to choose a tent with a secure zip to prevent insects or reptiles from getting inside.
I would also like to invite you on another camping holiday with our group of friends this summer. It would be a great opportunity for us to have fun together one last time before we graduate from college.
I look forward to hearing from you. Additionally, if you have any queries regarding your holiday, feel free to ask me.
Best regards,
William
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
You have addressed all three bullet points in the prompt effectively. You clearly explained why your friend would enjoy camping, provided relevant disadvantages such as medical access and safety concerns, and confirmed your interest in joining the trip. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, and the ideas are well-developed and relevant to the context. The response is balanced, and each section flows logically from the previous one, ensuring the reader understands your position throughout the letter. No parts of the task were omitted, and the content is fully aligned with the requirements.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The letter is well-organized with a clear structure. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the prompt, and the transition between ideas is smooth. You have used cohesive devices such as 'In addition to', 'Therefore', and 'Additionally' effectively to link your thoughts. The paragraphing is logical, and the progression of ideas is easy to follow. The opening and closing are appropriate for the task type, and the overall flow of the letter is natural and coherent, making it very easy for the reader to navigate the information provided.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.5
You have used a good range of vocabulary that is appropriate for the context of a friendly letter. Phrases like 'completely different experience', 'limited access', and 'secure zip' demonstrate a solid command of language. While the vocabulary is functional and accurate, it could be further enhanced by incorporating more sophisticated collocations or less common lexical items to reach the highest band. However, the current range is sufficient to convey your meaning precisely, and there are no errors in word choice or spelling that impede communication.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
Your grammar is generally accurate, and you have successfully used a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. For example, the use of conditional structures ('Since you're always used to...') and relative clauses ('...such as a dog shelter, you might also find...') shows good control. There are very few grammatical errors, and the punctuation is used correctly throughout the letter. The majority of your sentences are error-free, which demonstrates a high level of grammatical control. The writing is clear, fluent, and professional while maintaining the required informal tone for a friend.
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