Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-27
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
- describe some possible disadvantages
- say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Student answer (Band 7.5)
Dear Bhavin,
It's been ages since we last met. I hope you're doing well also I am glad that you asked for advice regarding a camping holiday.
Last year, when I went to Algonquin National Park for camping, I was amazed by the spectacular views over there, and it was fun. I'm pretty sure that, you will also have a wonderful experience over there as you like being connected to nature. Moreover, It will also help you to unwind from your day-to-day workload, so you can have a relaxed time, waking up in the forest by birdsongs instead of an alarm clock.
Advantages are numerous, however, you shouldn't ignore the cons of camping because sometimes the forest could be so dangerous due to wild animals, especially at night. I would like to recommend that you should build a campfire, so that wild animals can be kept away and you feel safe.
You know what, this summer, I'm also going to take a week off from my work place. If you're not hesitant to invite me, it would be a great excuse to use tent which is gathering dust in my garage. It would be an excellent adventure for both of us and we'll also get a time to meet each other and spend quality time together.
Let me know the perfect dates, so I can do shopping accordingly.
Best regards,
Nidhi Patel
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 8.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.0 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 8.0
You have addressed all three bullet points in the prompt effectively. You clearly explained why your friend would enjoy camping, identified potential disadvantages such as wild animals, and confirmed your interest in joining the trip. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, maintaining a friendly and informal style throughout. The ideas are well-developed, particularly the suggestion about the campfire and the personal touch regarding your own tent. The response is fully relevant to the task instructions and maintains a consistent position from start to finish.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a closing. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the task, which helps the reader follow your train of thought easily. You use cohesive devices such as 'Moreover', 'however', and 'if' to link your ideas effectively. The transition between paragraphs is smooth. While the structure is sound, a slightly wider variety of cohesive devices could elevate the flow further, but the current usage is sufficient to ensure a clear progression of ideas throughout the text.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You demonstrate a good range of vocabulary suitable for this informal task. Phrases like 'unwind from your day-to-day workload', 'spectacular views', and 'gathering dust' show a natural command of English. There are no significant errors in word choice that impede communication. While the vocabulary is effective and appropriate for the context, incorporating a few more sophisticated collocations or idiomatic expressions could help you reach a higher band. Overall, your lexical control is strong and supports the friendly tone of the letter.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.0
You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures effectively. Most of your sentences are error-free, and your control over punctuation is generally good. There are a few minor slips, such as 'also I am glad' (which should be 'and I am also glad') and 'get a time to meet' (which should be 'get some time to meet'). However, these minor errors do not interfere with the clarity of your message. You show a good grasp of verb tenses and modal verbs, which are essential for this type of correspondence.
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