Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-20
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
In modern era, crime are increasing day by day. Pupils using method to commit the crime they doing crime by digital technology.In this easy I will discuss reason and I give my view.
There are numerous reason why tv serial are and crime novels are popular. Firstly, now people become a more lazy that do not want to do hard work they want to earn a money easy way that is why they do a crime and by watching criminal serial Secondly, lack of job individual do not have a job so they can full fill there dreams they using different method to commit the crime.Lasty, in this first peace life people spend there more time on technology gadget by watching different type of serial and read a novel so they can earn a money without doing a hard work.
According to my opinion, the tv dramas are very famous because people watching this to commit the crime. the government should be banned these type if company that promotes the bad content that put a bad effect on people life due to this some individual lost their money that they earn by do hard work. For example, last year one serve conducted my government 80% crime didi by criminal bu using AI.Lastly, government should orgainise awareness camp so people can get knowledge how they can protect them by crime.
In conclusion, no doubt the crime rate now on the peak but by government make a strict law it should be banned.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses both parts of the prompt, but the development of ideas is limited and often unclear. The explanation for why crime dramas are popular is somewhat confused, as the text suggests people watch them to learn how to commit crimes rather than for entertainment. The position is stated but lacks logical support. The examples provided, such as the reference to 'AI' and '80% crime', are vague and do not clearly link to the popularity of the genre. To improve, you should focus on providing clear, logical reasons for the popularity of the genre, such as the thrill of mystery or the psychological appeal of detective work, rather than suggesting these shows are instructional manuals for criminals.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is organised into paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is often disjointed. While some cohesive devices are used (e.g., 'Firstly', 'Secondly', 'In conclusion'), they are often followed by sentences that do not logically flow from the previous point. For example, the transition between the popularity of crime novels and the claim that people watch them to commit crimes is abrupt and confusing. Referencing is also problematic, as the subject of 'they' or 'this' is frequently ambiguous. Improving the logical connection between sentences and ensuring each paragraph has a clear, singular focus would significantly enhance the coherence of your writing.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, which restricts the ability to convey complex ideas. There are frequent errors in word choice and collocation, such as 'full fill there dreams' (fulfill their dreams) and 'first peace life' (fast-paced life). The use of 'serial' to refer to novels and dramas is also imprecise. While the meaning is generally understandable, the lack of variety and the persistent errors in basic word usage prevent a higher score. You should focus on learning collocations and using more precise terminology related to media and societal trends to improve your lexical range.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'crime are increasing'), article usage, and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on, such as 'In modern era, crime are increasing day by day. Pupils using method to commit the crime they doing crime by digital technology.' The use of complex structures is attempted but is almost always inaccurate. To improve, you should focus on mastering basic sentence construction, ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and practicing the correct use of articles and prepositions.
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