Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-07-31

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter

• explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum
• describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
• give details of when you would be available for work

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Student answer (Band 7.0)

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope you are doing great. I am writing a letter to express my interest to work at the museum as a part- time voluntary candidate. I have seen the job post online that you are looking for people who are willing to do unpaid work at the museum.

I have less than 6 months experience related to this field. I want to improve my knowledge and skills by working in the museum. As a voluntary experience will add on my resume in future to build my career.

Currently, i am working in the public library, which would help me to gain communication, organization and adaptability skills. I will use my skills and experience to contribute effectively.

I am available during weekends as well as after 2pm during week days. I would be very grateful if i got this opportunity.

Thanks you and i would be looking for your positive response.

Your sincerely,

Lovepreet Kaur

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.0

The letter covers all three bullet points required by the prompt. You clearly state your motivation for volunteering, mention your background in a library to demonstrate relevant skills, and provide specific availability. However, the development of these points is somewhat brief. For instance, explaining why you want to volunteer could be expanded beyond just 'improving knowledge' to show more genuine interest in the museum's specific exhibits or history. The tone is appropriate for a formal letter, and the purpose is clear throughout the response.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.0

The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Paragraphing is used to separate the different requirements of the task. While the progression of ideas is generally clear, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat basic. Phrases like 'Currently' and 'I am available' help transition between ideas, but the flow could be improved with more varied linking words or phrases to connect your experience to the benefits you offer the museum. Overall, the message is easy to follow.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.5

You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using terms like 'voluntary candidate', 'adaptability', and 'contribute effectively'. There are some minor inaccuracies, such as 'voluntary experience will add on my resume', which should be 'add to my resume'. Additionally, 'job post' is slightly informal; 'advertisement' or 'vacancy' would be more suitable for a formal application. The vocabulary is sufficient to convey your meaning clearly, but it lacks the precision and variety required for a higher band score.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.5

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are several grammatical errors, such as 'I am writing a letter to express my interest to work' (should be 'interest in working'), 'Thanks you' (should be 'Thank you'), and the inconsistent capitalization of 'i'. While these errors are noticeable, they do not impede communication. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement and consistent capitalization. The use of complex structures is attempted, but accuracy needs to be more consistent to reach the next band level.

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