Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 15 · 2026-08-29
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give details of the course you took at the university
- explain why you recommend the university
- give some advice about how to apply
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................. ,
Student answer (Band 7.5)
Dear Sarah,
I hope you are doing well. I was happy to hear that you are thinking about applying for the same course that I studied at university. I would be glad to share some advice with you.
I completed a Bachelor of Computer Applications, which was a three-year course. We studied subjects such as programming, database management, web development and computer networking. There were also practical projects, which helped me develop useful technical skills.
I would definitely recommend this university because the teachers are experienced and supportive. The university also has excellent computer laboratories and a good library. Moreover, students have many opportunities to attend workshops and take part in practical projects.
For the application, I suggest that you visit the university’s official website and check the admission requirements and deadline carefully. Prepare all your academic documents in advance and make sure your personal statement is clear and well written. Finally, check the application form carefully before submitting it.
I hope this advice is useful. Please let me know if you need any help with your application.
Best wishes,
Gurpreet
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response fully addresses all three bullet points in the prompt. You clearly described the Bachelor of Computer Applications, provided logical reasons for recommending the university (experienced staff, facilities, and projects), and gave practical, actionable advice regarding the application process. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, maintaining a consistent informal yet informative register throughout. The ideas are well-developed and relevant, meeting all the requirements of the task effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The letter is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the prompt, which helps the reader follow your points easily. You use appropriate cohesive devices such as 'Moreover', 'Finally', and 'because' to link ideas within and between sentences. The paragraphing is logical and contributes to the overall clarity of the message. The flow is natural, and the use of referencing is accurate throughout the text.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.5
You demonstrate a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the context of university studies and advice. Phrases like 'admission requirements', 'academic documents', and 'personal statement' are used accurately. While the vocabulary is functional and clear, it is generally standard. To reach a higher band, you could incorporate more sophisticated collocations or idiomatic expressions that sound more natural in a friendly letter, such as 'gain hands-on experience' or 'keep an eye on deadlines'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The grammar is highly accurate, with a variety of sentence structures used correctly. You successfully employ complex sentences, such as 'I was happy to hear that you are thinking about applying for the same course that I studied at university.' Punctuation is used correctly throughout, and there are no significant errors that impede communication. The majority of your sentences are error-free, reflecting a strong command of English syntax and structure.
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