Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 12 · 2026-08-11

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Student answer (Band 7.0)

The two maps illustrate the current layout plan and the proposed redevelopment plan in future of a small town known as Islip.

Overall, the centre of the town has been planned to be well organised after the future modernisation along with addition of new amenities including dual carriageway, shopping centre, bus station and car park area.

Presently, the centre of Islip is designed in a horizontal pattern which has countryside in the north and housing areas in the south. There are two housing areas. Moreover, the main road is above the housing area , having multiple shops on each north and south side. Additionally, the main road is bifurcated at east and west side. These roads lead to the park and school respectively.

After redevelopment, the town will be organised and enclosed with a dual carriageway. Furthermore, the area of the Islip will be segregated by the line of shops in upper and lower areas. The upper part will have amenities of bus station at the extreme left, car park at the right side and shopping centre in the middle. All these facilities have footpath for pedestrians. A new housing area which will be well connectivity to dual carriage, will be positioned at the eastern corner of the map. The southern section will have two residential areas, one is situated at the right side and nearby, there will be a park. The school will be located at the southwestern edge of the dual carriageway along with that there will be another housing region will be built just below the dual carriageway.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.0

The response effectively covers the main features of both maps. You have successfully identified the key changes, such as the introduction of the dual carriageway and the new amenities. The overview provides a clear summary of the planned modernisation. However, some descriptions are slightly imprecise; for instance, describing the town as having a 'horizontal pattern' is vague. To reach a higher band, ensure that spatial relationships are described with greater precision, such as using specific compass directions or clear relative positions (e.g., 'north-east' instead of just 'right side'). Overall, the task is well-addressed with a logical selection of information.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.0

The essay is logically organised, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs that separate the current state from the future plans. You use a range of cohesive devices such as 'Moreover', 'Additionally', and 'Furthermore' to link ideas. While the progression is generally clear, some transitions feel slightly mechanical. The referencing is mostly accurate, though occasionally the connection between sentences could be smoother to improve the flow. Paragraphing is used appropriately to manage the different stages of the town's development, which helps the reader follow the comparison effectively.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.5

You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the maps, using terms like 'redevelopment', 'modernisation', 'amenities', and 'bifurcated'. There is an attempt to use less common vocabulary, which is generally successful. However, there are some minor inaccuracies in collocation and word choice, such as 'well connectivity' (should be 'well-connected') and 'amenities of bus station' (should be 'amenities such as a bus station'). Despite these minor slips, the vocabulary is adequate to convey the intended meaning clearly and with some precision.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.5

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. You show good control over basic grammar, and your meaning is consistently clear. There are some grammatical errors, such as 'on each north and south side' (should be 'on both the north and south sides') and 'another housing region will be built' (should be 'another housing region will be built'). While these errors are present, they do not impede communication. To improve, focus on article usage and prepositional phrases to ensure greater accuracy in your complex sentences.

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