Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 16 · 2026-08-22

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

SOUTHWEST AIRPORT

Student answer (Band 5.0)

The projects illustrates the site of airport nowadays and where will be processed next year.

Overall, it is clear that the area will be modernized and it will also provides with some facilities, such as taking public transports and others.

First, the inserted parts are bag drop, atm, sky train, as well as car hire. Furthermore, the cafe will replased south-west and this location will became check-in. By the way, the old check-in ground will be bag drop. The way

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0

Javob 150 so'zdan iborat minimal talabga javob bermaydi, bu esa ballga sezilarli ta'sir qiladi. Matn atigi 80 so'zdan iborat bo'lgani uchun ma'lumotlar yetarlicha rivojlantirilmagan. Garchi siz osmon poyezdining (sky train) qo'shilishi va ro'yxatdan o'tish hududining (check-in area) ko'chirilishi kabi ba'zi o'zgarishlarni aniqlashga uringan bo'lsangiz ham, xulosa to'liq emas va qayta qurish jarayoni haqida keng qamrovli sharh berish uchun zarur bo'lgan tafsilotlar yetishmaydi. Yaxshilash uchun siz diagrammalarda ko'rsatilgan barcha asosiy o'zgarishlarni tasvirlashingiz va topshiriqni to'liq rivojlantirishga imkon beradigan minimal uzunlik talabiga rioya qilishingiz shart.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0

Javobda kirish va asosiy xatboshidan foydalangan holda tashkiliy urinish ko'rsatilgan. Biroq, g'oyalarning rivojlanishi uzuq-yuluq va matn tugallanmagan gap bilan ('The way') yakunlangan. 'Furthermore' va 'First' kabi bog'lovchi vositalardan foydalanilgan, ammo ular ma'lumotlarning ravon oqimini yaratish uchun yetarli emas. Xatboshilarga ajratish ham akademik hisobot uchun yetarli darajada emas. Yaxshilash uchun har bir xatboshi aniq maqsadga ega ekanligiga va ikki xaritani solishtirishda o'quvchini yo'naltirish uchun gaplaringiz mantiqiy bog'langanligiga ishonch hosil qiling.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.0

Lug'at boyligi juda cheklangan va takrorlanuvchi. Siz aeroport sxemasidagi o'zgarishlarni aniq tasvirlamaydigan 'inserted parts' va 'area' kabi oddiy atamalarga tayanasiz. Shuningdek, 'replased' (replaced) va 'became' (become) kabi so'z tanlash va imlo xatolari mavjud. Yuqoriroq band olish uchun xaritalar va o'zgarishlarga oid aniqroq lug'atdan, masalan, 'relocated', 'transformed', 'extended' yoki 'demolished' kabi so'zlardan foydalanishingiz kerak. Tasviriy til ko'lamini kengaytirish ma'lumotni yanada samaraliroq yetkazishga yordam beradi.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0

Matn davomida ravshanlikka to'sqinlik qiluvchi tez-tez uchraydigan grammatik xatolar mavjud. Bularga 'The projects illustrates' (subject-verb agreement), 'it will also provides' (incorrect verb form) va 'the cafe will replased' (incorrect passive voice construction) misol bo'la oladi. Gap tuzilmalari asosan sodda va matn oxiridagi tugallanmaganlik jiddiy muammo hisoblanadi. Yaxshilash uchun asosiy gap tuzilmalarini, ayniqsa diagrammalardagi o'zgarishlarni tasvirlash uchun zarur bo'lgan majhul nisbatdan foydalanishni o'zlashtirishga e'tibor qarating hamda subject-verb agreement izchil ekanligiga ishonch hosil qiling.

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