Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Barron's Writing · 2026-08-27

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain why you are no longer using your bicycle.
• describe your bicycle.
• explain why you think your friend would like to have it.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear _________,

Student answer (Band 7.5)

Dear Alex,

I am writing regarding my old bicycle which I am no longer using and would like to sell it to you.

I often travel to school by my bicycle but unfortunately I met with an accident a week ago. Fortunately, I did not get hurt but due to this reason my parents advised me to travel by school bus rather than by bicycle.

I purchased this bicycle in 2025 which is a first generation model and includes a digital screen which records your heartbeat and speed in order to avoid any unfortunate accidents. Additionally, the bicycle comes with an automatic gear, brand new handles, classic modern design and double secure tyres.

I remember, you always wanted a bicycle to ride and have fun around your friends. Therefore, I am sure you will like it as it has all advanced features and not too expensive which you can easily afford.

please free to ask any further questions you may have regarding the bicycle and I would be happy to respond as soon as possible. I look forward to your response.

Best Wishes,

Ashu Berwal

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 8.0

The letter successfully addresses all three bullet points required by the prompt. You clearly explain the reason for selling the bike (the accident and parental advice), provide a detailed description of the bicycle's features, and explain why it would be suitable for your friend. The tone is appropriate for a letter to a friend, maintaining a friendly and informal register throughout. The ideas are well-developed and the purpose of the letter is clear from the opening sentence. You have fully satisfied the requirements of the task.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 8.0

The letter is logically organized, with each paragraph focusing on a specific aspect of the prompt. You use appropriate paragraphing to separate the introduction, the explanation of the accident, the description of the bike, and the closing. Cohesive devices such as 'Additionally', 'Therefore', and 'I remember' are used effectively to link ideas. The progression of information is smooth and easy to follow. The letter flows well from start to finish, and the referencing is clear throughout.

Lexical Resource — Band 7.0

You demonstrate a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the context, such as 'unfortunate accidents', 'digital screen', and 'classic modern design'. While the vocabulary is generally accurate and natural, there are minor issues with word choice, such as 'automatic gear' (which should be 'automatic gears') and 'double secure tyres' (which is slightly unnatural). However, these do not impede communication. The use of vocabulary is sufficient to convey your message clearly and effectively to your friend.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.0

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are some minor grammatical errors, such as 'please free to ask' (missing 'feel') and 'not too expensive which you can easily afford' (which lacks a subject or 'it is'). Despite these occasional slips, the majority of your sentences are error-free and the meaning is always clear. Punctuation is generally handled well, and the sentence variety shows a good level of control over English grammar.

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