Band 8.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 8.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-09-04
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 8.0)
The line graph illustrates the number of participants in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the film club consistently had the highest number of participants, while musical performances had the fewest. Table tennis experienced the most significant growth, whereas amateur dramatics showed a substantial decline. The number of participants in martial arts fluctuated slightly but remained relatively stable.
The film club was the most popular activity throughout the period. Its participation fell gradually from approximately 64 in 2000 to 60 in 2010, before rising to around 66 by 2020. Martial arts followed a relatively stable pattern, fluctuating between about 32 and 38 participants over the period.
In contrast, table tennis saw a substantial increase in participation. The number rose from approximately 16 participants in 2000 to 20 in 2005 and 2010, before increasing sharply to 35 in 2015 and 53 in 2020. Amateur dramatics followed the opposite trend, increasing slightly from about 26 to 28 between 2000 and 2005, but then falling steadily to around 6 by 2020. Meanwhile, musical performances had no participants in 2000 and 2005, but the figure increased to approximately 12 in 2010 and 18 in 2020.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 8.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 8.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 8.0 |
| Overall | 8.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 8.0
The response is excellent. You have successfully identified all key features of the graph, including the overall trends and specific data points. The overview is clear and effectively highlights the most significant changes, such as the growth of table tennis and the decline of amateur dramatics. You have made relevant comparisons throughout the report, which is essential for a high band score. The data is accurately reported, and the selection of information is balanced, ensuring that all categories are covered without unnecessary detail. This is a very strong performance that fully addresses the requirements of the prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 8.0
The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, a concise overview, and well-structured body paragraphs. Each paragraph focuses on a specific group of trends, which helps the reader follow the information easily. You have used a good range of cohesive devices, such as 'In contrast', 'whereas', and 'meanwhile', to link ideas effectively. The progression of ideas is smooth, and the paragraphing is appropriate. There is no evidence of mechanical or repetitive use of linking words; the flow of information is natural and professional throughout the entire report.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.5
You have demonstrated a wide and flexible range of vocabulary, which is appropriate for an academic report. Phrases like 'experienced the most significant growth', 'followed a relatively stable pattern', and 'substantial increase' show a good command of collocation and style. The vocabulary is precise and used accurately to describe the trends in the graph. There are no spelling errors, and the word choice is consistently sophisticated, contributing to the overall clarity and professional tone of the writing. You have successfully avoided repetition by using varied synonyms for change and movement.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 8.0
The response displays a wide range of grammatical structures with high accuracy. You have effectively used complex sentences, such as 'The number rose from approximately 16 participants in 2000 to 20 in 2005 and 2010, before increasing sharply to 35 in 2015 and 53 in 2020.' Punctuation is used correctly to manage clauses and lists. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and the control over tense usage (past simple for historical data) is consistent. There are no significant grammatical slips, and the writing is clear and easy to read throughout.
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