Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-09-08
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The line graph shows changes in the number of participants in five different activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia, between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, participation in most activities increased over the period, while amateur dramatics experienced a substantial decline and became the least popular activity by 2020. Film club remained one of the most popular activities throughout the period, whereas musical performances saw considerable growth after 2005.
Initially, the number of film club participants declined slightly, from 64 in 2000 to 62 in 2005 and then to 60 in 2010. However, participation subsequently increased, reaching 65 in 2015 and a peak of 66 in 2020. Similarly, the number of people participating in martial arts fell from 36 in 2000 to 31 in 2005. It then rose to 38 in 2010 before declining slightly to 35 in 2015. By 2020, the figure had returned to 36, the same level as in 2000.
Amateur dramatics followed a contrasting trend. Participation increased marginally from 27 in 2000 to 29 in 2005 but then fell sharply to 20 in 2010. The downward trend continued, with the figure reaching just 8 participants in 2020.
Meanwhile, table tennis participation rose from 18 in 2000 to 20 in 2005 and remained unchanged in 2010. It then increased considerably, reaching 52 participants in 2020 and surpassing martial arts after 2015. Finally, musical performances had no participants between 2000 and 2005, but participation subsequently increased steadily, reaching 18 by 2020.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview of the main trends and selected relevant data points to support your descriptions. The comparison between activities is well-handled, particularly the observation regarding the decline of amateur dramatics versus the growth of table tennis. The data is accurately reported, and the structure allows for a logical flow of information. To reach a higher band, ensure that you consistently highlight the most significant 'main features' rather than listing every single data point, though your current approach is already quite strong and analytical.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs that group the activities effectively. You use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'initially', 'however', 'similarly', and 'meanwhile' to guide the reader through the data. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate different trends. The progression of ideas is smooth, and referencing is clear throughout the text. The use of linking words is natural and contributes to the overall coherence of the report.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You demonstrate a good range of vocabulary appropriate for an IELTS Academic Task 1 report. Phrases such as 'substantial decline', 'considerable growth', 'contrasting trend', and 'remained unchanged' show a good command of descriptive language. The vocabulary is precise and used accurately in context. There are no spelling errors, and the word choice is consistently formal and suitable for the task. To improve further, you could incorporate more sophisticated collocations or varied synonyms for 'increased' and 'decreased' to show even greater flexibility.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a high level of grammatical accuracy. You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures effectively, such as the use of subordinate clauses in 'while amateur dramatics experienced a substantial decline and became the least popular activity by 2020'. Punctuation is used correctly throughout. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and the few minor slips are rare and do not impede communication. Your control over tense usage (past simple for the period 2000-2020) is consistent and correct.
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