Band 8.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 8.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-09-17
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 8.0)
The line chart provides information about the number of participants in five different social activities at a centre in Melbourne, Australia, between 2000 and 2020.
Overall, the majority of people participated in the film club. The number of film club members remained relatively stable, while the figure for martial arts also fluctuated slightly. In contrast, both table tennis and musical performances showed an upward trend, whereas participation in amateur dramatics declined considerably.
The film club accounted for the highest number of participants throughout the period, with approximately 60 people or more. The figure decreased gradually from around 64 participants in 2000 to 60 in 2010, before rising to approximately 66 in 2020. Similarly, the number of people participating in martial arts fluctuated, falling from about 36 in 2000 to 32 in 2005, then increasing to 38 in 2010. It subsequently declined slightly to 34 in 2015 before reaching around 36 participants in 2020.
The number of musical performances rose from 0 participants in 2000 and 2005 to approximately 12 in 2010 and 18 in 2020. Table tennis also experienced a significant increase, from about 16 participants in 2000 to 20 in 2005 and 2010, before rising sharply to 36 in 2015 and 54 in 2020. Amateur dramatics, on the other hand, showed the opposite trend. After increasing slightly from 26 to 28 participants between 2000 and 2005, the figure fell steadily to 20 in 2010, 14 in 2015 and only 6 in 2020
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 8.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 8.0 |
| Overall | 8.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response fully satisfies the requirements of Task 1 by providing a clear and comprehensive overview of the main trends and making relevant comparisons across all five categories over the twenty-year period. The student correctly identifies the film club as consistently having the highest participation and notes the contrasting trajectories of table tennis and amateur dramatics. Key data points, such as the peak of table tennis at 54 in 2020 and the starting point of musical performances at zero, are accurately cited and integrated into the report. There are no significant omissions or inaccuracies, demonstrating a well-developed understanding of the visual data.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The essay is logically organised with a clear structure, moving from a well-formulated introduction and overview into detailed body paragraphs. Information and ideas are sequenced logically, with smooth transitions between the general trends and specific data points. Cohesive devices such as 'In contrast', 'Similarly', and 'on the other hand' are used accurately and flexibly to signal relationships between different activities. Paragraphing is handled appropriately, with each category and its specific timeline given adequate space, ensuring the response flows smoothly from beginning to end.
Lexical Resource — Band 8.0
The student demonstrates a wide and flexible vocabulary suitable for an academic task, employing precise lexical items such as 'fluctuated', 'upward trend', 'declined considerably', and 'rising sharply'. Word choice and collocations are generally natural and accurate. While the vocabulary is not overly exotic, it is used with sufficient precision and control to convey the statistical movements clearly and effectively. Minor inaccuracies are virtually absent, showing a strong command of topic-specific phrasing.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 8.0
The response features a wide range of complex sentence structures used accurately and flexibly. The majority of sentences are error-free, showcasing excellent control over tense consistency and subordination (e.g., 'After increasing slightly from 26 to 28 participants between 2000 and 2005, the figure fell steadily...'). Punctuation is handled correctly throughout. There are no noticeable grammatical errors that impede communication, earning this section a high band score.
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