Band 6.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 6.5 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-08-03
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 6.5)
The graph illustrates the locations where young people in an Australian town currently attend dance classes, while the bar chart compares the numbers of students under 11 and those aged 11–16 participating in three types of dance.
Overall, private studios are by far the most popular venue for dance classes, whereas college studios are the least preferred. In terms of dance styles, ballet is the most popular among children under 11, while modern dance attracts the highest number of students aged 11–16.
Regarding class locations, private studios account for the largest proportion, at 48%. School halls are the second most common venue, representing 24% of classes, followed by community halls at 18%. College studios are the least popular location, making up only 10% of the total.
As for the different dance styles, ballet has the highest number of participants under the age of 11, with approximately 600 students, compared with around 300 students aged 11–16. Tap dance is attended by about 450 younger students and just over 400 older students, showing relatively similar participation between the two age groups. In contrast, modern dance is the least popular among children under 11, with around 300 participants, but it is the most popular choice for those aged 11–16, attracting approximately 500 students.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 6.5 |
| Overall | 6.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.0
The response is excellent and fully addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview that highlights the most significant trends in both charts. The data is accurately selected and reported, with effective comparisons made between the two age groups (e.g., noting that modern dance is the least popular for the younger group but the most popular for the older group). The information is well-supported by the figures provided in the charts, and the structure allows for a logical flow of information. There are no omissions, and the key features are clearly identified, meeting the requirements for a high band score.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5
The response is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. You have used paragraphing effectively to separate the two distinct datasets (locations and dance styles). Cohesive devices such as 'whereas', 'in terms of', 'regarding', and 'in contrast' are used naturally to link ideas and guide the reader through the report. The transition between the overview and the detailed body paragraphs is smooth, and the referencing is precise. The overall structure is coherent, and the information is presented in a way that is easy to follow, demonstrating a high level of control over the organization of the text.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.0
You have demonstrated a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey information with precision. Phrases such as 'account for the largest proportion', 'representing 24% of classes', and 'attracting approximately 500 students' are used accurately and appropriately for an academic report. The vocabulary is varied and avoids unnecessary repetition. While the range is solid, incorporating a few more sophisticated collocations or synonyms for 'popular' (such as 'favoured' or 'preferred') could elevate the response further. However, the current usage is precise and error-free, which is highly effective for this task type.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.5
The response exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with a high degree of accuracy. You have successfully used complex sentences, such as 'The graph illustrates the locations where young people... while the bar chart compares...', and maintained control over punctuation and tense usage throughout. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and the few complex structures used are handled with confidence. There are no noticeable grammatical slips that impede communication, and the control over sentence variety contributes to the professional tone of the report.
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