Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-08-18
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The charts illustrate information about various types of dance classes, their locations and the number of people attending them in a town in Australia.
Overall, private studios and school halls were the most commonly used locations for dance classes. In addition, Ballet recorded the highest number of students aged under 11, whereas Modern dance accounted for a greater number of students aged between 11 and 16.
An analysis of the pie chart reveals that private studios recorded 48% of dance classes, making them the most commonly used location. School halls accounted for 24% of dance classes, which is the second most preferred location. Moreover, the figure for community halls and other locations recorded 18% of dance classes. In contrast, college-based studios represented the smallest proportion of dance classes, at 10%.
From the bar chart, it is evident that Ballet recorded 600 students under the age of 11, whereas it recorded 300 students aged between 11 and 16. Similarly, Tap dance was attended by approximately 450 students under 11, compared with around 420 students aged between 11 and 16. In contrast, Modern dance was more popular among students aged between 11 and 16, with approximately 520 students, while 300 students were recorded under 11.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview of the main trends and supported these with specific data points from both the pie and bar charts. The selection of features is logical, highlighting the most popular locations and the age-related differences in dance preferences. The comparison between the two age groups is well-handled, and the data is accurately reported. To reach the highest band, ensure that the overview is even more integrated, perhaps by linking the location trends to the popularity of specific dance types if the data allows, though your current approach is already very strong.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is well-organized with a clear logical progression. Each paragraph has a distinct focus: the introduction, the overview, the location analysis, and the age-group analysis. You use cohesive devices such as 'In addition', 'Moreover', 'In contrast', and 'Similarly' effectively to guide the reader through the data. The paragraphing is appropriate, and the information flows smoothly from one point to the next. The use of referencing is clear, and the structure supports the overall argument without being mechanical.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.5
You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey information precisely. Phrases like 'accounted for', 'represented the smallest proportion', and 'recorded the highest number' are used accurately. There is a good attempt to vary the language used to describe data, avoiding repetitive structures. While the vocabulary is functional and appropriate for an Academic Task 1, incorporating a few more sophisticated collocations or synonyms for 'recorded' or 'most commonly used' would elevate the response further.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response features a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures. You use subordinating conjunctions like 'whereas' and 'while' effectively to compare data points. The grammar is generally accurate, with very few errors. Punctuation is used correctly to separate clauses and list information. The control over complex structures is consistent, and the writing is error-free for the most part, which facilitates clear communication throughout the report.
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