Band 7.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-08-18
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.0)
The pie chart and column chart provide data on the location and kinds of dance lessons the youth in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Overall, a majority of dance lessons are given in private studios, whilst the proportion is lowest for college-based studios. While ballet is most popular among children under the age of 11, modern dance is more appealing to youngsters aged 11 to 16.
Firstly, private studios make up for 48% of the dance locations, whilst after-school choreography lessons in the school halls account for half this proportion. Community halls and other locations, and college-based studios add up to 18% and 10% respectively.
Furthermore, 600 students under 11 have opted for ballet while this number is half for students between the ages 11 and 16. Tap dance is equally popular among both the age groups with the number being somewhat over 400 for both. On the contrary, modern dance is only learnt by 300 students below the age of 11, though count for pupils aged 11 to 16 exceeds 500.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 6.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.0 |
| Overall | 7.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.0
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview and selected the main features from both charts, such as the dominance of private studios and the age-related trends in dance styles. Comparisons are made appropriately, for instance, noting that ballet is more popular among younger children while modern dance appeals more to the older group. The data is accurately reported, and the key features are well-highlighted. To reach a higher band, ensure that all data points are integrated into a cohesive narrative rather than listing them, though your current approach is already quite strong and covers the requirements well.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs focusing on the two different charts. Cohesive devices such as 'while', 'furthermore', 'on the contrary', and 'whilst' are used effectively to link ideas. The progression of information is smooth, moving from the general location data to the specific age-related dance preferences. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate the different data sets, which helps the reader follow the analysis easily. The structure is clear and supports the overall purpose of the report.
Lexical Resource — Band 6.5
You demonstrate a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey information with precision. Phrases like 'account for', 'opted for', and 'exceeds' are used correctly. There is an attempt to use less common vocabulary, such as 'choreography' and 'proportion', which adds to the academic tone. While the vocabulary is generally accurate, it is functional rather than highly sophisticated. To improve, you could incorporate more varied synonyms for 'popular' or 'number' to avoid repetition and enhance the lexical variety further.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.0
The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures effectively. Most sentences are error-free, and the grammar is generally controlled. For example, the use of subordinate clauses with 'while' and 'though' shows good control over complex structures. There are no significant grammatical errors that impede communication. A few minor improvements in phrasing, such as 'though count for pupils' (which should be 'though the count for pupils'), would make the writing even more polished. Overall, the grammatical accuracy is high.
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