Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-08-23

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

The pie chart provide information about the locations of dance classes across five different areas, while accompanying bar graph illustrates the demographic distribution of two age groups among three virous type of dance activities.

Overall, dance classes in the private studios are the most common location, while in college-based studios are the least popular. The number of students who participate in ballet and tap who age under 11 higher than those age between 11 and 16, whereas this is oposite in modern dance.

In terms of location of dance classes, the private studios receive the highest percentage, at 48%,

followed by school halls make up 24%, representing the second most common location.

The community halls and other account for 18%, while college-based studios represent only tenth of the total.

Looking at the age distribution, participants under 11 are mostly join ballet and tap, at around 600 and 450 respectively, while for those age between 11 and 16, this numbers are 300 and around 420 respectively. In contrast, the age group members from 11 to16 are highest in modern class at roughly 550, whereas the numbers for the younger age gorup was only 300.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.5

You have successfully identified the main features of both charts and provided relevant comparisons. You clearly highlighted the dominance of private studios and the age-related trends in dance styles. However, the report could be improved by ensuring all data points are accurate; for instance, you mentioned 'tenth' for college-based studios, but the chart shows 10%, which is accurate, yet the phrasing is slightly awkward. Additionally, ensure that all comparisons are precise. You have covered all parts of the task well, providing a clear overview and supporting details, which meets the requirements for a solid band 7.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. You use cohesive devices such as 'In terms of', 'followed by', and 'In contrast' to guide the reader. However, there are some minor issues with referencing and flow, such as the phrase 'this is oposite in modern dance' which lacks a clear antecedent. Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate the location data from the age distribution data. The progression of ideas is generally clear, though some transitions feel slightly mechanical.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using terms like 'demographic distribution', 'participate', and 'in contrast'. There are some spelling errors, such as 'virous' (various) and 'oposite' (opposite), and minor word choice issues like 'mostly join' instead of 'mostly participate in'. While you attempt to use less common vocabulary, the occasional inaccuracies prevent a higher score. To improve, focus on more precise collocations and ensure spelling is checked, as these errors slightly detract from the professional tone of the report.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

You use a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues ('The pie chart provide', 'this numbers are') and missing articles ('represent only tenth'). While these errors are noticeable, they do not impede communication. You have attempted some complex structures, but the frequency of minor errors in basic grammar prevents a higher band. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles will significantly enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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