Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-09-05
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The pie charts compare the locations in which dance classes are held and the types of dance classes attended by young people in an Australian town, with the participants divided into two age groups: those under 11 and those aged 11–16.
Overall, private studios were by far the most common venue for dance classes, whereas college-based studios accounted for the smallest proportion. In terms of dance styles, modern dance attracted the largest number of students overall, while ballet showed the most pronounced difference between the two age groups.
Almost half of all classes (48%) were held in private studios. School halls were the second most common location, accounting for 24%, followed by community halls at 18%. By contrast, only 10% of classes took place in college-based studios.
Turning to the types of dance classes, modern dance was the most popular, with more than 800 students in total. Approximately 300 of these were under 11. Participation in tap classes was more evenly distributed between the two age groups, with the figures for both groups falling within the range of 400 to 500 students. Ballet, however, displayed a substantial age-related difference, as the number of children under 11 was considerably higher than the number of students aged 11–16.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response effectively addresses all parts of the task. You have provided a clear overview of the data, highlighting the most significant trends such as the dominance of private studios and the popularity of modern dance. The selection of data is relevant, and you have made appropriate comparisons between the two age groups, such as noting the contrast in ballet participation. The information is well-supported by the provided figures, and the report is balanced, covering both charts comprehensively. No key features were overlooked, and the summary is accurate and well-structured.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph has a distinct focus: the introduction, an overview, the location data, and the dance style data. Cohesive devices such as 'whereas', 'in terms of', 'by contrast', and 'however' are used effectively to link sentences and ideas. The paragraphing is appropriate, and the flow of information is smooth, making the report easy to follow. There is no evidence of mechanical or repetitive use of linking words, and the referencing is clear throughout the text.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You have demonstrated a good range of vocabulary appropriate for an academic report. Phrases such as 'accounted for the smallest proportion', 'most pronounced difference', and 'substantially age-related difference' show a level of sophistication. The vocabulary is precise and used accurately to describe trends and comparisons. While the range is sufficient, incorporating a few more varied synonyms for 'common' or 'popular' could further enhance the lexical variety. Overall, the word choice is natural and contributes to the clarity of the report.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a high level of grammatical control. You have used a variety of complex sentence structures, such as the opening participial phrase and the use of subordinate clauses, with high accuracy. Punctuation is used correctly to manage sentence structure. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and there are no significant grammatical slips that impede communication. The control over tense and subject-verb agreement is consistent throughout the text, reflecting a strong command of English grammar.
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