Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-09-11
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The chart depicts the data about the various forms of dance classes attended at different localities by the children under 16 in the town of Australia.
Overall, private studios held highest number of classes while college studios are preferred least. Similarly, ballet type was the most popular class for age group of 11-16. On the other hand, modern type style of dancing is preformed most by children under 11.
The number of classes in private studio was on peak of 48% while, school halls offered 24%. Classes held at community halls
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
The response is significantly under the 150-word minimum requirement, which severely impacts the ability to fully address the task. While you have attempted to identify some main features, such as the popularity of private studios and the age-related preferences for dance styles, the analysis is incomplete. The response ends abruptly mid-sentence, failing to provide a comprehensive summary or a full comparison of the data provided in the charts. To achieve a higher band, you must ensure all parts of the prompt are covered and that the response meets the minimum length requirement to allow for sufficient development of ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The response shows some attempt at logical organization, with an introductory sentence and an overview paragraph. However, the abrupt ending and the incomplete sentence at the end of the second paragraph disrupt the flow of information. Cohesive devices are used sparingly, and the lack of a complete structure makes it difficult to follow the progression of ideas. To improve, ensure that each paragraph is fully developed and that you use linking words (e.g., 'furthermore', 'in contrast', 'consequently') to connect your points more effectively throughout the report.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, with terms like 'depicts', 'localities', and 'preferred' being used correctly. However, the range is quite limited, and there are some awkward phrasings, such as 'modern type style of dancing' and 'preformed most'. The vocabulary is sufficient to convey basic meaning, but it lacks the precision and variety required for higher bands. To improve, focus on using more academic collocations and precise terminology related to data description, such as 'the highest proportion' or 'the least popular venue'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The response contains a mix of simple and some attempted complex structures. There are grammatical errors, such as 'held highest number' (missing an article) and 'preformed' (likely a spelling error for 'performed'). The sentence structure is generally understandable, but the incomplete sentence at the end is a significant issue. To improve, focus on article usage (e.g., 'the highest number') and ensure that your sentences are complete and grammatically sound. Practicing the construction of complex sentences will also help you demonstrate a wider range of grammatical control.
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