Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 19 · 2026-07-25

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

In modern era, technology is enhance with the period of time. recently customers went to mall or a supermarket and opin to purchase from all over world. From my point of view, it is a positive development such as multiple choices and availbilty world wide.

With the above statement, primarily, the expansion of import-export businesses, along with the easy availability of transportation, results in getting all international brand products at one store or supermarket. In other words, big companies in the food industry, manufacturing sector, and automobile industry start producing and selling their branded items, leading to a huge amount of sales and expansion into other countries. For example, the United States of America has Domino's pizza and burgers that have taken over worldwide.

Secondly, from the customer's benefit perspective, buyers have more selecting options or varieties of products to buy with different technological benefits and specific specialties of items in different home accessories and daily life uses, such as electronics like refrigerators, washing machines, and air conditioners from companies like LG, Carrier, Mitsubishi, etc.

On the other hand, more options lead to a bad effect on human opinion and perspectives, making the willingness to buy the same companies' same model range items necessary, resulting in overexpansion and unstable financial support. Furthermore, national branding experiences a decrease in sales and losses in companies, leading to unemployment effects on the country's economy.

conclusion, product multiple choices option is benefits in product advasment users and the using in the daily day life and the worst effect in the mind-set of the human to choices from the varities of different companies products.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The response addresses the prompt by discussing the availability of global food products. However, the development of ideas is inconsistent. While you mention benefits like variety, the discussion on 'national branding' and 'unemployment' is somewhat tangential to the core topic of food consumption. Furthermore, the argument lacks depth; for instance, the example of Domino's is mentioned but not clearly linked to whether this is a positive or negative development. To improve, ensure each paragraph directly supports your stated position and provides a clear, logical explanation for your claims.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The essay is organised into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate, such as 'With the above statement, primarily' or 'conclusion, product multiple choices option'. These transitions do not always create a logical flow between sentences. Additionally, some sentences are disjointed, making the progression of ideas feel repetitive or unclear. Using a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'in contrast') and ensuring they are used in the correct context would significantly improve the coherence of your writing.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The vocabulary range is limited and often imprecise. There are several instances of awkward phrasing and word choice errors, such as 'technology is enhance with the period of time' and 'product advasment'. You rely on basic vocabulary, and some terms are used incorrectly, which occasionally hinders the clarity of your message. To reach a higher band, you should focus on learning collocations (words that naturally go together) and using more precise academic vocabulary to express your ideas, rather than relying on repetitive or informal phrasing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the essay, including issues with verb tense ('technology is enhance'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or lack proper punctuation, which makes the text difficult to read at times. While you attempt some complex structures, they are often faulty. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence construction, ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and proofreading for common errors like pluralisation and article usage.

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