Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-10-27

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

Every country people acess to clean water a basic human right,because it's improtant to every warere in daily basis water supply.I strongly belive that human basic need provided free of charge.

In Bangladesh is a poor and under developments country,while There is lot's of problem here, One of the major problem is water supply.In Dhaka city is densly populated area,there live lot's of poor people here.every are are need to water so goverment should try each and every were provide a free water supply.

In Dhaka city water are not clean so there huge of impact of every were.In Bangladesh water rechorce board are try to prroduce free of water supply.There huge of impact in poor side area every day they need clean water but govement should concern a huge of water supply.In that time every were increasely work for clean water supply every home and provided free of charge.Every people tax every year so goverment give a free off water supply produces.In that day every local are goverment produce a free water both and produce a card in every area,so people are daily basis go there and need clean and free water.

People and govermet search many area to fresh and clean water and invest huge ammount of money there.In water supply provide in every houses day by day and free of cost.Water is basic and daily basis need beacause of every day we need and prepareing a food,shower,toilet and lot's of other think need.

In conclusion we need a human basic need a clean water for every people and also provided a free of cost.Goverment supply a water poor people to rich people every were need fullfill a basic human need and free of cost.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

Your position is clear: you strongly agree that clean water should be free, and you keep the discussion focused on access in Bangladesh, especially for poorer residents of Dhaka. The examples of public water points and government investment give the response some relevant support. However, the argument is only partly developed: several points repeat the need for water without explaining how free household supply would be funded or why it should apply to every home. The discussion also shifts between free household connections and free public water points, so the proposal is not fully clear. To strengthen the response, explain one or two reasons in more depth and connect each example directly to the claim that every home should receive water free of charge.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

The response has an introduction, several body paragraphs and a conclusion, and the reader can follow its general focus on water access in Bangladesh. However, progression between ideas is limited, and the paragraphs do not consistently develop distinct points. For example, the discussion moves from Dhaka’s population to water quality, then to taxes and public water points, without clear links showing how these ideas support one another. Connectors such as “In that time” and “In that day” are unclear, while repeated references to “every” and “free” make the writing feel repetitive. Organise the body around separate reasons, such as affordability and public responsibility, and use clear transitions and references to show how each point follows from the previous one.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.5

You use a basic range of topic-related vocabulary, including “clean water,” “water supply,” “poor people,” “government” and “human basic need,” so the main subject is recognisable. However, vocabulary is repetitive and many word choices or spellings make meaning difficult to follow. Phrases such as “huge of impact,” “water rechorce board,” and “every were increasely work” are unclear or inaccurate, and “basic need” is repeated rather than varied. Build a more reliable set of expressions for this topic, such as “access to safe drinking water,” “water infrastructure,” and “low-income households.” Check spelling and learn common word partnerships so that your ideas can be expressed more precisely.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

You attempt to communicate several connected ideas and use some longer sentence forms, including sentences beginning with “because” and “while.” However, sentence structures are limited and errors are frequent, sometimes making relationships between ideas hard to understand. For example, “Every country people acess to clean water a basic human right” lacks a clear grammatical structure, while “In Dhaka city water are not clean so there huge of impact” has problems with sentence formation and subject–verb agreement. Articles, plurals and verb forms are also often inaccurate, and punctuation is inconsistent, with many sentences joined by commas. Practise building accurate simple sentences first, then combine them using conjunctions; check that each sentence has a subject and a correctly formed verb.

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