Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-03
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The maps illustrate how Beechwood Farm changed between 1950 and the present day.
Overall, the farm has undergone substantial redevelopment, changing from a traditional agricultural farm into a mixed-use site that combines farming with tourism. Although some agricultural features, including the fruit trees, soft fruits, vegetable fields, farmhouse and chicken area, have remained, several new facilities have been introduced, and the transport network has been modernised.
On the western side of the farm, the fruit trees, soft fruit fields and vegetable plots have remained largely unchanged. However, a farm shop has been constructed near the entrance, together with a parking area. Furthermore, the former track has been replaced by a road leading towards the centre of the farm.
More noticeable changes have taken place on the eastern side. The land that was previously used for sheep farming has been converted into a camping field and an area containing solar panels. The barn has been moved to a more central location, while a number of holiday cottages have been built beside the farmhouse. In addition, extra roads and another parking area have been added to improve access throughout the site. Despite these developments, the farmhouse and chicken enclosure remain in the same locations.
Word Count: 192
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response is excellent. You have successfully identified all the key features of the maps, including the transition from agricultural land to a mixed-use site. The overview clearly highlights the main trends, such as the modernisation of the transport network and the addition of tourism-related facilities. You have made effective comparisons between the 1950 layout and the present day, such as noting the conversion of sheep farming land into a camping area and the relocation of the barn. The information is well-selected and accurately reported, fully satisfying the requirements of the task.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The essay is logically organised with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph has a distinct focus, moving from an overview to specific details on the western and eastern sides of the farm. You have used a variety of cohesive devices effectively, such as 'Furthermore', 'In addition', and 'Despite these developments', which help the reader follow the narrative of change. The paragraphing is skilful, and the referencing is clear throughout the text. The flow of information is smooth and professional.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You demonstrate a wide and flexible range of vocabulary, which is used with precision. Phrases such as 'substantial redevelopment', 'mixed-use site', and 'modernised' are well-chosen and appropriate for an academic report. You avoid repetition and use specific terminology related to the map features effectively. The control of collocation is strong, and there are no noticeable errors in word choice. The vocabulary is sophisticated and contributes to the overall clarity and professional tone of the response.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a wide range of grammatical structures with high accuracy. You have used complex sentences, such as the 'Although...' construction in the second paragraph and the 'Despite...' structure in the final paragraph, with ease. The majority of your sentences are error-free, and the punctuation is used correctly to support the meaning. There is a good balance between simple and complex forms, and the control over verb tenses (past for 1950, present for current) is consistent and correct throughout the report.
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