Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-10-02
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
The provided two pictorial diagram illustrate how an area called Beechwood farm demonstrated changes and has been converted into a modernized one. The diagrams cover the period between 1950 and today.
Overall, Beechwood farm has been trnasformed from rural area into a commercial and densely populated residential area. The most significant changes have been the complete disapperiance of sheep area and eracted a road instead of track.
Despite enormous transformation in the area, the main road located in the north-west part of the map has been remained unchanged and also, fruit trees, soft fruits area located in the west part of the map and vegetables in the southern have been remaines unchanged. Similarly, chickens and farmhouse located in the bottom right corner of the map have been remained unchanged.
However, solar panels has been appeared in the top right corner of the map and below these, a new bulding has been constructed in order to parking. In the north part of the map camping field and parking area have been built. Additionally, a new farm shop has been constructed in front of the parking area. A track has been turned into a road. The barn located in the east has been knocked down to built holiday cottages. Barn has been lied between vegetables and chickens area.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 6.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5
Javobda 1950-yildagi va hozirgi Beechwood fermasi taqqoslanib, topshiriqning barcha qismlariga javob berishga harakat qilingan. Qishloq hududining tijorat hududiga aylangani qayd etilgan umumiy sharh bor, biroq ayrim xususiyatlar yetarlicha ochib berilmagan yoki noto‘g‘ri tasvirlangan. Masalan, qo‘ylar saqlanadigan hudud yo‘qolgani to‘g‘ri ko‘rsatilgan, ammo joylashuvni tasvirlashda nima o‘zgarishsiz qolgani borasida chalkashlik bor: omborxona buzilib, o‘rniga dam olish uylari qurilgani aytiladi, keyin esa omborxona sabzavot ekinlari bilan tovuqlar orasida joylashgani qayd etiladi. Bundan tashqari, quyosh panellari va kemping maydoni kabi ayrim tafsilotlar tilga olingan bo‘lsa-da, asosiy xususiyatlarni tanlash va bayon qilish yuqoriroq band uchun zarur bo‘lgan aniqlikka ega emas. Fikrlar keltirilgan, ammo ular yetarlicha rivojlantirilmagan.
Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.0
Javobning umumiy tuzilishi izchil: kirish, umumiy sharh, o‘zgarishsiz qolgan xususiyatlar va yangi o‘zgarishlar alohida paragraflarga ajratilgan. Fikrlarni bog‘lash uchun 'Overall', 'Despite' va 'However' kabi vositalardan foydalanilgan, biroq olmoshlar nimaga ishora qilayotgani va gaplar orasidagi o‘tishlarda ba’zan noaniqlik yoki sun’iylik seziladi. O‘zgarishlarning turli toifalarini ajratish uchun paragraflardan o‘rinli foydalanilgan, shu bois o‘quvchi o‘tmishdan hozirgi holatga o‘tgan umumiy jarayonni kuzata oladi. Shunga qaramay, paragraflar ichidagi o‘tishlarni ravonroq va mantiqiyroq tartibga solish mumkin.
Lexical Resource: Band 5.5
Topshiriq uchun ishlatilgan lug‘at yetarli; 'commercial', 'densely populated' va 'modernized' kabi kamroq uchraydigan so‘zlarni qo‘llashga urinish bor. Biroq sifatga salbiy ta’sir qiladigan sezilarli imlo va so‘z tanlash xatolari mavjud: 'trnasformed', 'disapperiance', 'eracted' va 'bulding'. So‘z birikmalari ham ba’zan noqulay, masalan, 'eracted a road instead of track' yoki 'has been remained'. Bu xatolar muloqotga to‘liq to‘sqinlik qilmaydi, ammo lug‘at boyligi bo‘yicha natijani yetarli darajada cheklaydi.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0
O‘quvchi sodda va murakkab gap shakllarini aralashtirib ishlatishga, jumladan 'has been transformed' va 'has been constructed' kabi majhul nisbat shakllarini qo‘llashga uringan. Biroq fe’l shakllari, nisbat va ega-kesim mosligida tez-tez xatolarga yo‘l qo‘yilgan. Masalan: 'the main road... has been remained', 'solar panels has been appeared', 'to built holiday cottages' va 'Barn has been lied'. Bu xatolar o‘quvchiga matnni tushunishni qiyinlashtiradi va murakkab grammatik tuzilmalarni qo‘llash mahorati cheklanganini ko‘rsatadi. Shu sababli yozuvning grammatik aniqlik bo‘yicha bandi pastroq.
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