Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-02

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The process diagram gives information on how fabric in formed from bamboo in nine steps starting from plants to final wears.

Overall, the process involves seeding the bamboo plant in Spring, going through stages (Harvest, Cut into stripes , adding water filteration, crushing, making of yarn), then making the fabric.

Bamboo plants are seeded in Spring, then harvested in autumn and in the third step harvested plants are cut down into stripes, Furthermore, after the cutting process soften fibres are formed which are then proceed to the filtration where long fibres are separated from the rest.

Liquid pulp is formed by crushing the filtered fibres which is then spinned to make yarn.

Finally the yarn is weaved and fabric is formed an then be changed into any kind of wearables like shirts and soacks.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5

The response covers the main stages of the bamboo manufacturing process, but it fails to meet the minimum word count requirement of 150 words, which significantly impacts the development of the response. While the overview is present, the description of the process is somewhat rushed and lacks the necessary detail to fully explain the transformation from raw material to finished product. The summary is accurate, but the lack of length prevents a more comprehensive reporting of the features shown in the diagram. To improve, you should expand on the descriptions of each stage, perhaps by adding more detail about the physical changes occurring during the crushing and spinning phases.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5

The response is logically organized, following the chronological order of the process. You use some cohesive devices such as 'Furthermore', 'then', and 'Finally' to link ideas. However, the paragraphing is insufficient; the response is essentially one large block of text, which hinders the overall flow. To achieve a higher band, ensure you separate the introduction, the overview, and the body paragraphs clearly. Additionally, some transitions feel a bit mechanical. Improving the variety of linking words and ensuring clear paragraph breaks will significantly enhance the coherence of your writing.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

You demonstrate an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, using terms like 'harvested', 'filtration', 'liquid pulp', and 'weaved'. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling, such as 'stripes' (instead of 'strips'), 'soacks' (instead of 'socks'), and 'proceed' (used incorrectly instead of 'processed'). These errors do not impede communication, but they do limit the precision of your writing. To improve, focus on using more precise technical vocabulary related to manufacturing processes and pay closer attention to spelling and word forms to ensure your writing sounds more professional and accurate.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The response contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are several grammatical errors, such as 'fabric in formed' (should be 'is formed'), 'soften fibres' (should be 'softened fibres'), and 'an then be changed' (should be 'and can then be changed'). While these errors are noticeable, they rarely prevent the reader from understanding the intended meaning. To reach a higher band, you should aim for more error-free sentences and work on your control of passive voice, which is essential for describing processes. Proofreading for subject-verb agreement and article usage would also be beneficial.

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