Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-06
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The given diagram shows us how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.
In the subsequent paragraphs, i will elaborate the given diagram.
Firstly, bamboo plants are planted in Spring season. After taking good care of it, it is harvested in the season of Autumn. In the next step, it is cut into strips. Strips are then crushed to make pulp. At that point, pulp is than filtered so that long fibers are separated from the liquid.
Soon after, the fibres are then soften by the mixture of water and amine oxide. As time went on, It is then used to make yarn by spinning fiber. Later, it is then weaved to make fabric. Lastly, the fabric is ready to be used to make garments.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response fails to meet the minimum word count requirement of 150 words, which significantly impacts the score. While the process is described in a logical sequence, the response lacks a clear overview of the main stages or trends, which is essential for a Band 6 or higher. The description is quite basic and lacks the necessary detail to fully explain the manufacturing process shown in the diagram. To improve, you must expand on the technical stages and ensure the response meets the length requirement to allow for a more comprehensive summary of the information provided.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
The response is organised into paragraphs, and there is a basic attempt at logical progression using transition words like 'Firstly', 'In the next step', and 'Lastly'. However, the cohesion is somewhat mechanical and repetitive. The referencing is occasionally unclear, such as the use of 'it' in 'After taking good care of it', where the antecedent is not immediately obvious. The overall structure is simple, and the lack of length prevents the development of a more sophisticated flow between the stages of the process.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary is adequate for the task but remains quite limited and repetitive. You use basic verbs like 'cut', 'crushed', and 'make' throughout the text. There is little attempt to use more precise, topic-specific vocabulary related to industrial manufacturing processes. While the meaning is generally clear, the lack of variety in word choice prevents the response from reaching a higher band. Incorporating more academic and process-oriented terminology would significantly enhance the quality of your writing.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The response uses a mix of simple and some passive structures, which is appropriate for a process description. However, there are several grammatical errors, such as 'pulp is than filtered' (spelling/word choice), 'fibres are then soften' (incorrect verb form), and 'As time went on' (inappropriate for a static process description). Punctuation and capitalization are also inconsistent. While these errors do not completely impede communication, they occur frequently enough to limit the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and consistent use of the passive voice for process descriptions.
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