Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-20

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 5.5)

The diagram illustrates the manufacturer process of fabric from bamboo plant.

Overall, it is evident that, the linear process making fabric has been completed in 9 steps, starting from bamboo plants and ending at manufactured fabric. Each plays its own role in process.

Firstly, the bamboo plant is cropped in spring then it is harvested in autumn season. After harvesting and shaping it is undergone by spiral disks to cut into strips in third step. Afterwhich, these strips are crushed to make pulp liquid then, this liquid is processed through filter to separating long fibers from liquid. Additionally,water and amine oxide are added into long fibers to make these fibers softer then, it is spinned by spinner to make yarn. After making yarn, it goes towards weaver to make fabric from yarn which is used to make fabric that is by public. At the last stage, the fabric is made completely that can freely go for customers for purchasing.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5

The response covers the main stages of the process, from harvesting to the final product. However, the description is somewhat mechanical and lacks a clear overview of the transformation process. While the steps are identified, the response fails to highlight key comparisons or groupings, such as the chemical versus mechanical stages. The conclusion is slightly repetitive, mentioning 'fabric' twice in the final sentence, which suggests a lack of focus on summarizing the core information effectively. To reach a higher band, ensure the overview synthesizes the process rather than just listing steps sequentially.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5

The response uses basic cohesive devices such as 'Firstly', 'After', and 'Additionally' to sequence the steps. However, the paragraphing is insufficient; the entire body of the report is contained within a single paragraph, which hinders readability. The flow between sentences is sometimes repetitive, with several sentences starting with 'After' or 'Afterwards'. The logical progression is present, but the lack of paragraph breaks makes the text feel like a list rather than a cohesive report. Improving the use of referencing and varying transition words would enhance the overall structure.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks variety and precision. Phrases like 'manufacturer process' (should be 'manufacturing process') and 'it is undergone by' are inaccurate. There is a reliance on simple verbs such as 'make' and 'cut'. While the student successfully uses technical terms like 'amine oxide' and 'spinner', the overall range is limited. To improve, the student should focus on using more precise verbs and collocations related to industrial processes, such as 'extracting', 'converting', or 'synthesizing'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

The response contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors. Examples include 'the linear process making fabric has been completed' (should be 'the process of making fabric consists of'), 'it is undergone by' (incorrect passive construction), and 'it is spinned' (the past participle of spin is 'spun'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with comma usage. While the meaning is generally clear, the frequency of these errors prevents the response from reaching a higher band. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and correct passive voice formation is essential.

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