Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.5 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-24
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Student answer (Band 5.5)
The following steps illustrates the different stages of how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.
Overall, There are several stages in manufacturing fabric from bamboo plants. This process explains how the bamboo plants are planted, extracted and manufactured fabric from it.
In the first stage the bamboo plants are planted in the spring season which should be maintained for long autumn season in autumn season bamboo plants are harvested. The harvested bamboo plants are sent to cutting process. In fourth stage the pieces of bamboo are crushed and it will be converted into liquid pulp. This pulp is filtered and separate long fibers from liquid pulp.
Soften fibers collected in the sixth stage it will be reacted by adding water and amine oxide. In seventh stage these reaction will be spin for making yarn. Eighth stage the weave is to make fabric. Fabric is manufactured in this stage so that it is ready to make cloths in the final stage the cloths are manufactured by fabric .
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.5 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5
The response covers all stages of the bamboo manufacturing process, from planting to the final product. However, the overview is somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear summary of the key features or the transformation process. While the main steps are identified, the description of the process is a bit mechanical and lacks the analytical depth required for a higher band. The final sentence is slightly confusing, as it suggests cloths are manufactured by fabric, which is a misinterpretation of the diagram. To improve, focus on grouping the stages more logically and providing a more concise, accurate summary of the overall process.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.5
The essay is organized into paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and occasionally repetitive, such as the frequent use of 'In [x] stage'. The transition between the harvesting phase and the chemical processing phase is abrupt. While the reader can follow the sequence of events, the lack of varied linking words and the somewhat mechanical structure of the sentences hinder the flow. Improving the use of referencing and transition signals would help create a more cohesive and professional-sounding report.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.5
The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but it is quite basic and repetitive. Phrases like 'cutting process', 'converted into liquid pulp', and 'manufactured in this stage' are functional but lack variety. There are some minor issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'these reaction will be spin' (should be 'this mixture is spun'). To achieve a higher score, you should aim to use more precise technical vocabulary related to manufacturing processes, such as 'extraction', 'transformation', 'subsequently', or 'processed into'.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The response contains a mix of simple and some attempted complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('The following steps illustrates'), incorrect verb forms ('these reaction will be spin'), and awkward phrasing ('the weave is to make fabric'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with capitalization and comma usage. While the meaning is generally clear, the frequency of these errors impacts the overall readability. Focusing on consistent verb tenses and ensuring subject-verb agreement will significantly improve the accuracy of your writing.
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