Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-24

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The diagram illustrates the process of how fabric is made from bamboo.

Overall, the process of manufacturing fabric from bamboo is quite complex. The process includes various types of techniques such as harvesting, filtering, softening, spinning, weaving and so on.

Firstly, bamboo is planted in the spring season of the year. Then, it is harvested in the autumn season. Followed by the cutting of bamboo into the strips which are crushed to make liquid pulp in the next part of the process. Then, the liquid pulp is filtered which helps dramatically in separating long fibers from the liquid pulp. After which fibers are softened by adding water and amine oxide which is a major component. Next, the method of spinning takes place in order to make ham. Final part of the procedure is weaving which ultimately gives the desired product which is fabric. The whole procedure consists of many different types of complex techniques which ultimately leads us to the final outcome.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The response covers the main stages of the bamboo fabric manufacturing process, from planting to weaving. However, the overview is somewhat generic, stating the process is 'complex' rather than highlighting the key transformation stages. While the response identifies the main features, it lacks a clear comparison or a more analytical summary of the process flow. The description of the stages is accurate, but the response would benefit from a more concise grouping of the steps to better demonstrate the logical progression of the manufacturing cycle.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The response is logically organized, following the chronological order of the diagram. Cohesive devices such as 'Firstly', 'Then', 'Followed by', and 'Final part' are used to guide the reader through the stages. However, the paragraphing is insufficient; the entire body of the report is contained within a single paragraph, which hinders the overall structure. Additionally, some transitions feel slightly mechanical, and the referencing of the final product as 'ham' appears to be a misunderstanding of the diagram, which disrupts the logical flow of the final sentence.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, using terms like 'harvested', 'liquid pulp', 'filtered', and 'spinning'. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice, most notably the use of 'ham' instead of 'yarn' or 'thread', which indicates a lack of precision. The range of vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive, relying heavily on basic sequencing words. To achieve a higher band, you should incorporate more precise technical terminology related to manufacturing processes and avoid repeating the same sentence structures.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While the grammar is generally clear, there are some awkward phrasings, such as 'which helps dramatically in separating' and 'which ultimately leads us to the final outcome'. There are minor errors in article usage and sentence construction, but these do not impede communication. The control of punctuation is generally good, though the sentence variety could be improved by using more sophisticated subordinate clauses to link the stages of the process more fluidly.

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