Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-08-24

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The process gives information about nine different stages of producing fabric from bamboo plant .

Initially, the first stage starts with the planting of bamboo in spring season and it would be harvested in autumn by humans .Then harvested bamboo plant goes in to machine for cutting in to strips . Then on the fourth stage the strips are crushed to make thick liquid pulp . This pulp processed in to the filter and it can be strain to separate long fibers from that liquid substance .Then at this stage of the production water and amine oxide added to the liquid pulp to soften the bamboo fibers .

Furthermore , The process continues and makes the fibers spin in to the spinner to convert in to yam threads . After that it can be shaken to make a peace of fabric and on the final stage that fabric can be use to make clothes like shirt of socks .

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The response covers the main stages of the bamboo fabric manufacturing process, from planting to the final product. However, the overview is somewhat limited, and the description of the process is purely sequential without highlighting key features or making meaningful comparisons. For instance, the transition from raw material to chemical processing is described, but the significance of the chemical additives is not fully explained. To improve, ensure you provide a clear overview in the introduction that summarizes the entire process and focus on grouping related stages rather than listing them one by one. The response is accurate in its reporting of the steps shown in the diagram.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The essay is organized into three paragraphs, which is a logical structure for a process description. The progression of ideas is generally clear, moving chronologically through the stages. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical and repetitive, with 'Then' and 'After that' appearing frequently. Some transitions, such as 'Furthermore,' are used in a way that does not perfectly fit the context of a process description. Improving the variety of linking words and ensuring smoother transitions between the stages would help elevate the coherence of the response.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, allowing the reader to follow the process. You use some relevant technical terms like 'pulp,' 'fibers,' and 'spinner.' However, there are several word choice errors and inaccuracies, such as 'peace of fabric' (piece), 'yam threads' (yarn), and 'shirt of socks' (shirts or socks). These errors occasionally distract the reader. To reach a higher band, focus on using more precise terminology related to manufacturing processes and ensure correct spelling and collocation of common words.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While the meaning is generally clear, there are frequent grammatical errors, particularly with articles ('the planting of bamboo in spring season'), verb forms ('it can be strain'), and prepositions ('goes in to machine'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, with unnecessary spaces before commas and periods. While these errors do not completely impede communication, they are frequent enough to affect the overall fluency of the writing. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and article usage would be beneficial.

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