Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-09-01

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The given diagram demonstrates making of fabric from bamboo.

Overall, This this shows process of making fabric from bamboo plants. It involves three major section first is harvesting then processing and making fabric.

In beginning, bamboo plants are planted mostly in spring season and when they reach their fully grown period they are harvested. Whereas, In second section it includes many processes. Firstly, harvested bamboo is cut into strips then crushed to make liquid pulp out of it, then pulp is filtered removing water from fibres then fibres are made soften by adding of water and amine oxide.

The final process includes making of yarn from that soften fibres then this yarn is consumed in making of a fabric they are weaved into a fabric. So, this is how fabric is made from bamboo plant and lastly this fabric is used in making finished products such as T-shirts, shirts, and many other fabric items.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.0

The response covers the main stages of the bamboo fabric manufacturing process, from harvesting to the final product. However, the overview is weak and lacks a clear summary of the key features or the overall nature of the process. The description of the steps is generally accurate, but some details are slightly underdeveloped, such as the transition between the chemical processing and the final weaving stage. To improve, ensure the overview highlights the cyclical or transformative nature of the process and provides a more professional summary of the stages involved.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The essay is organised into logical paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the process. However, the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical and repetitive, such as the frequent use of 'then' and 'in beginning'. The referencing is occasionally unclear, and the flow between sentences could be smoother. While the paragraphing is appropriate, the transition between the harvesting and processing stages lacks a sophisticated link, making the progression feel slightly disjointed at times.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks the precision and range required for a higher band. Phrases like 'making of fabric' and 'fully grown period' are somewhat simplistic. There are also minor issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'consumed in making of a fabric' and 'made soften'. To reach a higher band, you should incorporate more precise technical terminology related to manufacturing processes, such as 'extraction', 'chemical treatment', or 'textile production'.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.5

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors throughout. Examples include 'This this shows process' (repetition and missing article), 'In beginning' (missing article), and 'adding of water' (incorrect prepositional phrase). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with comma usage. While these errors do not completely impede communication, they are frequent enough to lower the score. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles would significantly improve the clarity of your writing.

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