Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-09-06

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The diagram illustrates the process of how bamboo fabric is harvested by farmers and then made into a final product to be used by consumers.

First of all, the bamboo plants are grown in spring and then harvested by the farmers in autumn. After that, the plants are cut into small strips through some specialized machinery. Once this is finished, the strips are crushed to make liquid pulp, and then filtered to get long fibres from that liquid.

In order to make clothes, water and amine oxide are added into the liquid to make soft fibres. Next, it is spun to make yarn. At this point, the weave is generated which is usually used to make bamboo fabric. Finally, the final product is ready for use by the customers.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0

The response fails to meet the minimum word count requirement of 150 words, which significantly impacts the score. While the process is described in a logical sequence, the summary lacks a clear overview of the main stages or the transformation involved. The description is somewhat mechanical, simply listing steps rather than synthesizing the information. To improve, you should include an introductory overview that highlights the key stages of the process and ensure the response meets the length requirement to allow for a more detailed explanation of the transformation from raw bamboo to finished fabric.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The response is logically organized, following the chronological order of the manufacturing process. The use of cohesive devices such as 'First of all', 'After that', 'Once this is finished', and 'Finally' helps to guide the reader through the stages. However, the paragraphing is insufficient; the entire response is presented as two short paragraphs, which does not effectively separate the distinct phases of the process. Improving the use of paragraphing and varying the cohesive devices would help to create a more sophisticated flow and better structure the information provided.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some relevant technical terms such as 'specialized machinery', 'liquid pulp', and 'amine oxide'. However, the range is somewhat limited, and there is a reliance on simple verbs like 'make' and 'get'. To reach a higher band, you should incorporate more precise vocabulary related to industrial processes, such as 'extracting', 'processing', 'converting', or 'synthesizing'. The current word choice is functional but lacks the variety and precision expected at higher levels.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The response uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, such as 'In order to make clothes, water and amine oxide are added into the liquid to make soft fibres.' While there are few grammatical errors, the range of structures is limited. The passive voice is used appropriately for a process description, which is a strength. To improve, try to incorporate a wider variety of complex sentence forms, such as relative clauses or participle phrases, to enhance the sophistication of your writing. The current level of accuracy is good, with no major errors impeding communication.

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