Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · Cambridge IELTS 20 · 2026-09-17

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

The process illustrates the making of a fabric from bamboo.

Overall, the process involves 9 different steps involving several seasons. Major steps include the planting of bamboo and cutting it into short strips to convert it into liquid, and then yearning to reach the final stage of product.

Firstly, the bamboo is planted in the spring. The farmer harvests these crops in the autumn season. These crops are cut into small strips for further crushing into small pulp. The pulp contains long fibers in it, which are separated using a filter. To soften out these fibers, water and amine oxide are added to the mixture.

In the later stages, the mixture is then spun to make yarn. This yearning process leads to the weaving step to make the final material, namely fabric. At last, the fabric is used to make different kinds of socks and t-shirts to be sold in the market.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.5

The student successfully covers all the main steps in the bamboo manufacturing process, from the initial planting in spring to the final creation of socks and t-shirts. The overview outlines the general nature of the nine-step process, mentioning both seasonal context and the transformation into liquid pulp. However, there are minor inaccuracies in reporting the sequence and actions; for instance, the text states that the pulp contains long fibers which are separated using a filter, whereas the diagram shows that the filtration step separates long fibres from the liquid, followed by softening the fibres. Additionally, 'yearning' is used incorrectly in place of 'yarn' or 'spinning'. Despite these slight misinterpretations of technical details, the overall response provides a clear summary of the process, satisfying the requirements for a Band 6.0.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.0

The response is organized logically with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs that follow the chronological progression of the process. Cohesive devices such as 'Firstly', 'In the later stages', and 'At last' are used appropriately to guide the reader through the stages of manufacturing. Paragraphing is handled sufficiently, separating the introduction/overview from the body details. However, referencing and transitions between sentences can occasionally feel somewhat mechanical. For example, the transition between the third and final paragraphs relies on basic sequencing words rather than more integrated cohesive ties. Overall, the text demonstrates a coherent arrangement and logical progression, aligning well with the descriptors for Band 6.5.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.5

The student demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary for the task, successfully employing terms such as 'harvest', 'pulp', 'filter', 'soften', and 'weaving'. Less common lexical items are attempted, including 'amine oxide' and 'manufacturing'. However, there are notable word choice errors and slips, such as using 'yearning' instead of 'yarn' or 'spinning', and minor awkwardness like 'converting it into liquid'. Spelling is generally accurate, but vocabulary limitations and occasional imprecise lexical choices restrict the score to a Band 6.0.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

The writer utilizes a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, incorporating passive structures such as 'the bamboo is planted' and 'water and amine oxide are added', which are appropriate for a process description. There are several error-free sentences, and grammar control is generally sound; punctuation is also handled adequately. However, a few grammatical and mechanical errors appear, such as 'involves 9 different steps involving several seasons' (awkward repetition) and 'for further crushing into small pulp' (slightly unnatural collocation). These errors are non-systematic and rarely impede overall communication, placing the response securely in the Band 6.5 range.

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