Band 6.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.5 · IELTS Academic Practice Accelerator · 2026-09-09

IELTS Writing Task 1 question

The line graph shows the number of first time visitors and returning visitors who visited Caryl Island from 2000 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of first time visitors and returning visitors who visited Caryl Island from 2000 to 2008.

Student answer (Band 6.5)

The line graph tracks the change in first time visitors and returning visitors of Caryl Island over the given time period (2000 to 2008).

Overall, the highest number of first time visitors was recorded in 2008 whereas the highest number of returning visitors was witnessed in 2006. The decline in number of maiden visitors was observed in 2002 and of recurring visitors in 2008.

In 2002, the first time visitors were half in numbers as compared to the year 2000. After 2002, there was a linear increase in inaugural visitors till 2008. That year, the initial visitors were capped at 12,000. Maximum growth in number of newcomers was in 2006. The number of newcomers that year was 10,000.

The visitors coming back to the island on their recurring trip increased each year with an exception of 2008. In year 2006, about 15,000 visitors were witnessed on return trips,more than any other year. Optimal growth was observed from 2000 to 2002 where the number of repeating visitors jumped from 3,000 to 10,000 visitors.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 6.5

You have successfully identified the main trends and provided a clear overview of the data. You covered both categories (first-time and returning visitors) and made relevant comparisons, such as noting the peak years for each group. However, the report could be improved by including more specific data points for the start and end of the period to provide a more comprehensive summary. While you mentioned the 2002 decline and the 2008 peak, some of the descriptions of the trends are slightly vague. Overall, you have addressed all parts of the task effectively.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 6.5

The response is logically organized with a clear introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs focusing on each visitor type. The progression of ideas is easy to follow. You used some cohesive devices, such as 'whereas', 'after 2002', and 'with an exception of', which help link your points. To reach a higher band, ensure that your transitions between sentences are more varied and less mechanical. For instance, the start of your paragraphs could be more fluidly connected to the previous information to improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource — Band 6.0

You have a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information clearly. You used terms like 'maiden visitors', 'recurring trips', and 'inaugural visitors' to avoid repetition, which is a positive feature. However, some word choices are slightly unnatural or imprecise, such as 'maiden visitors' (which is usually reserved for ships) and 'capped at' (which implies a limit rather than a recorded figure). Focusing on more precise collocations for data reporting will help you achieve a higher score.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 6.0

You demonstrated a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. Most of your sentences are clear and error-free, which ensures that communication is never impeded. There are a few minor grammatical slips, such as 'half in numbers as compared to' (which should be 'half the number compared to') and 'In year 2006' (which requires 'the'). While you have good control over basic structures, incorporating a wider variety of complex grammatical forms, such as passive voice or more sophisticated relative clauses, would enhance your range.

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