Band 7.5 IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 7.5 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-08-05
IELTS Writing Task 1 question
The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
EU Exports of Goods to India and China in 2000 and 2011
Student answer (Band 7.5)
The pie charts compare the proportions of goods exported from various European Union countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011.
Overall, Germany became the dominant exporter to both India and China by 2011, while the United Kingdom’s share of exports to India declined considerably. In addition, exports to China became increasingly concentrated in Germany, whereas exports to India were distributed more evenly among several countries.
Regarding exports to India, the United Kingdom was the largest exporter in 2000, accounting for 29%, followed by Belgium at 25% and Germany at 15%. However, by 2011 Germany had become the leading exporter, with its share rising to 25%, while Belgium declined slightly to 20%. In contrast, the United Kingdom’s contribution fell sharply to 13%. France and Italy experienced modest increases from 8% to 9% and 7% to 9%, respectively, whereas Finland remained unchanged at 2%.
Turning to China, Germany already held the largest share in 2000 at 38%, and this figure increased substantially to 48% in 2011. By comparison, Belgium’s exports decreased markedly from 5% to 2%, while France fell from 13% to 10%. The United Kingdom also recorded a decline, from 9% to 7%, whereas the Netherlands rose slightly from 4% to 5%. Austria remained stable at 2%, and the proportion classified as the other categories doubled from 4% to 8%.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 7.5 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 7.5 |
| Lexical Resource | 7.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 7.5 |
| Overall | 7.5 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 7.5
The response is excellent. You have fully addressed all parts of the task by identifying the main features and making relevant comparisons between the two years and the two destinations. The overview is clear and highlights the most significant trends, such as Germany's rise to dominance and the decline of the UK's share in India. You have effectively selected and reported key data points to support your summary without listing every single figure, which demonstrates a high level of analytical skill. The information is accurate and well-organised, meeting all requirements for a high band score.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 7.5
The response is logically organised with a clear progression of ideas. Each paragraph has a distinct focus: the introduction, the overview, and the two body paragraphs detailing exports to India and China respectively. You have used a variety of cohesive devices effectively, such as 'Regarding', 'In contrast', 'Turning to', and 'By comparison', which guide the reader smoothly through the data. Paragraphing is used appropriately, and referencing is clear throughout the text. The flow of information is natural and professional, making the report very easy to follow.
Lexical Resource — Band 7.0
You have demonstrated a wide and sophisticated range of vocabulary. The use of precise collocations and descriptive language, such as 'dominant exporter', 'increasingly concentrated', 'declined considerably', and 'recorded a decline', is highly effective. You avoid repetition and use a variety of terms to describe trends and changes in proportions. The vocabulary is not only accurate but also appropriate for an academic report. There are no errors in word choice or spelling, and the language used is natural and precise throughout the entire response.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 7.5
The response displays a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and accuracy. You have successfully used complex sentence structures, including subordinate clauses and comparative constructions, without any errors. Punctuation is used correctly to enhance clarity. The control over tense and subject-verb agreement is flawless. The writing is error-free, and the sophisticated use of grammar contributes significantly to the overall professional tone of the report. It is a very strong performance that meets the criteria for the highest band.
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