Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-09-09
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
The most important aim of science should be to improve people live's. I completely agree with this statement. Moreover science is the biggest growing invention for Humanity. The explore of science making human life much more easier than what it was before. For example people from all over the world are now connected to each other through internet by using the device such as mobail,Ipad,laptop etc. This device is all science magic and greatest invetion on Humanity.
The science is the biggest advantage to us human.It give us the opportunity to explore more and invent more. Because of science, Now as of present time is very modern. It is now focusing on moving the industry from to automation, Robotic and Ai. That will help human in a very different way and it will make the human life much more easier.
From past to present, Science has make us very productive,creative and more ambition than before. For the thirst of new invention from science making human realise it is very big and magnificent. Now with science, Nasa Company travelling space and getting information outside of earth from earth. Moreover with nasa help now the satellite has halping early to inform various global warning from space. That is very impossible task that as of science accomplished.
Sciences has make us human life very much more easier compare than before. Now with continious science exploration human are making much progressed in it. In future, there reside more Amazing device ready to discoved by science that will eventually help us in many way's. For this all of the reasion i thought science is making human life easier
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses the prompt by expressing a clear position in favor of science as a tool for improving lives. However, the development of ideas is limited. While you provide examples like the internet and space exploration, the arguments remain somewhat superficial and repetitive. To achieve a higher band, you should move beyond listing examples and instead provide deeper analysis of how science specifically impacts human well-being, perhaps by discussing the balance between technological progress and ethical considerations. The ideas are relevant, but they lack the depth and extension required for a higher score.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is organized into paragraphs, which helps the reader follow the structure. However, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate. For instance, phrases like 'The explore of science' and 'For this all of the reasion' are awkward and hinder the flow of ideas. While there is a logical progression from the introduction to the conclusion, the transitions between sentences are sometimes abrupt. Improving the variety and accuracy of linking words (e.g., 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'in addition to') would significantly enhance the coherence of your writing.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
Your vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive, often relying on basic terms like 'science', 'human', and 'easier'. There are frequent errors in word formation and collocation, such as 'The explore of science', 'mobail', and 'invetion'. Additionally, some phrasing is unnatural, such as 'Nasa Company' and 'getting information outside of earth from earth'. To improve, you should focus on using more precise academic vocabulary and ensuring that words are used in their correct grammatical form. Spelling errors are also frequent and occasionally distract the reader.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The essay contains a high frequency of grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. Common issues include subject-verb agreement ('Science has make us', 'satellite has halping'), incorrect pluralization ('people live's', 'way's'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are generally simple, and attempts at complex sentences often contain errors, such as 'Because of science, Now as of present time is very modern.' You need to focus on basic sentence construction, specifically ensuring that subjects and verbs agree and that articles are used correctly before nouns.
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