Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · Cambridge IELTS 18 · 2026-10-29

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

Student answer (Band 5.0)

Scinece plays and crucial role in everyone's life which is unevitale, its impacts can be different based on the relainace on it.

I agree with statement that science have been the part of our lives on what are depenedent till date.

Science should ba the utter most purpose for battement of mankind lives only, without carrying any ilicit idae behind it.

We all are well informed that Science is undeniable miracle what a human did for others.

Case study of Polio Vaccination and Covid 19:

According to the given number in special child sepcially handicap which were enormous born in Paksitan and Afghanistan mistreated due to virus causing children to become handicap after birth.

Due to progree in medical science man is finally able to overcome both of lethal diseases like covid-19 and Polio, and saved thousands of lives just from droping couple of drops in infants mouth after birth for polio vaccination and injecting the injection for the cure of Covid-19 panedemic.

In addition we can not unsee the ease being introduce in human lives after the invention of internet everyone is connected to their loved ones on the distance of one click.

Recommendation:

we collectively are depended on the need and usage of technology , which itseld is the results of deelopment and speady progress in Science but there are some dos and donts we should follow:

1. The usage of internet shold be monitered specially children underage 18.

2. Govermnet should update themselve for their new technology or Science

3. Usage and availability of Science should be equall for every class.

Conculsion:

All things considered Science have been a help for mankind which itself a factor we cant not ignore but the core idea is to improve man's life either by technology or medical Science.

Science playes a key-role to bring ease in ourlive which is a established fact by now.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

Your position is broadly clear: you agree that science should improve people’s lives, and you support this with examples from medicine and communication. The discussion of polio vaccination and Covid-19 is relevant, as is the point that the internet helps people stay connected. However, the response only partially develops the question of whether this should be science’s most important aim. The recommendations about monitoring children’s internet use and equal access to science are introduced but not explained or linked clearly to your argument. Some claims, such as science having “no illicit idea behind it,” are also unclear. To strengthen the response, explain why improving lives should take priority and develop each example with accurate, specific reasoning.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

There is some organisation: the response moves from a stated position to examples, recommendations and a conclusion. Headings such as “Case study” and “Conclusion” help identify sections, and “In addition” signals another point. However, the overall progression is not consistently clear. The numbered recommendations interrupt the discussion and are not connected to the central argument, while the medical example contains several ideas in one difficult-to-follow passage. Connections between sentences are sometimes missing or unclear, and the conclusion largely repeats the opening claim rather than drawing the points together. Use focused paragraphs, with one main idea in each, and add clear links explaining how each example supports your position.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You attempt topic-related vocabulary, including “medical science,” “lethal diseases,” “technology,” and “availability,” and the examples show an effort to discuss science in different areas. However, the range is limited and many spelling, word-form and collocation errors make parts difficult to understand. Examples include “unevitale,” “relainace,” “battement,” and “speady progress”; phrases such as “the distance of one click” and “droping couple of drops” are also unnatural. Some wording is imprecise, including “special child” and “the given number,” which leaves the intended meaning uncertain. Build accuracy by checking spelling and learning common collocations, such as “improve people’s lives,” “make progress,” and “administer a vaccine.”

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

The response attempts both simple statements and longer sentences, for example the sentence beginning “Due to progress in medical science,” but control is inconsistent. Frequent errors in sentence structure, agreement, articles and verb forms can make meaning difficult to follow. Examples include “Science have been the part,” “Science playes,” and the fragment-like opening, “Science plays and crucial role … which is unevitale.” The long sentence about vaccination combines several actions without clear grammatical relationships, and punctuation does not reliably separate ideas. Practise building accurate simple sentences first, then combine them using clauses such as “because” and “which.” Check subject–verb agreement, articles and sentence boundaries during revision.

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