Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-11-05

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

People have different view about that now a days by the interent, air transportions, trade popoular culture,has rapidly increased moreover famous individuals try to believe, it is a good thing that the gowring interaction between nations through globalisation.I compeltly agree with this opinion though the internet have some downside,our life have been now so easy and some people say that we already living in morden era.

The are number of resons why interent is essential in our daily life.Festly every nation and country need internet for there communication, without communication it will be hard to handle a business because business are done by commnuication and this thing provies by interent.For example without internet gobal trade will not be possible because all of those thing control by interent. Secandly now days big inderuties are selling there prodact though the interent because people of all ages now use interen or socia media so they catch there castumer from there all those thig have possible for the imterent.Without iternet we can not images such thing like people can now do there work at home students can attent there class and it is easy to transfer money or any infromation with in a sceand.

In addition, internet has globalize us it like we live in a village where every one can talk bye texting or call at those thing are possible all thanks to the internet.Moreover poeplecan see or learn any culture from the interent now they do not need to expore or pysicaly visit those place they ca watch it from interent and gathure information about it.

In conclusion, considering those thing about interent, i would like to say that it is a good and essential for us and it is increasing rapidly because poeple people are depened to interent.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0

You give a clear overall opinion—“I completely agree”—and discuss several relevant effects of globalisation, including communication, international trade, online business, remote work and access to other cultures. These examples show an attempt to explain why increased interaction is beneficial. However, the response addresses the task only partially: it focuses almost entirely on the internet, while the prompt also names air travel, trade and popular culture as ways globalisation connects nations. The opening briefly mentions these, but the body does not develop them, and the possible downside is acknowledged without explanation. To strengthen the response, explain a smaller number of benefits in more depth, include a specific example, and address the view more directly rather than treating internet access as the whole topic.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.5

The response has a recognisable structure: an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion. Sequencing words such as “Firstly,” “Secondly,” “In addition” and “In conclusion” help signal the stages of your argument, and the ideas generally remain connected to the topic. However, progression within paragraphs is sometimes difficult to follow because several points are crowded together, and some links are unclear—for example, the move from global trade to industries selling products online. The repeated reliance on “internet” also makes the argument feel repetitive rather than progressively developed. Use one main idea per paragraph, explain how each example supports it, and make references such as “those things” more precise. This would make the organisation clearer and the linking less mechanical.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.5

You use some relevant topic vocabulary, including “globalisation,” “communication,” “global trade,” “industries,” “social media” and “culture.” This gives you a basic range for discussing the subject. However, vocabulary is limited and repeated, particularly “internet,” and frequent spelling errors make parts of the response difficult to understand: examples include “interent,” “gobal,” “prodact” and “castumer.” Some expressions are also imprecise or unnatural, such as “famous individuals try to believe” and “we live in a village.” Aim to learn accurate spellings of key topic words and use more precise collocations. For instance, you could describe globalisation as “connecting societies” and say that businesses “reach customers online,” rather than repeating general references to the internet.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt both simple and longer sentences, using structures such as “because” and “without,” and the reader can usually identify your main point. However, complex sentences are often faulty, and frequent errors in sentence construction, verb forms, agreement, articles and punctuation sometimes make meaning difficult to follow. For example, “the internet have some downside” has an agreement error, while “people can now do there work at home students can attent there class” joins separate ideas without clear sentence boundaries. There are also incomplete or confusing constructions, such as “it is a good and essential for us.” Practise writing shorter, complete sentences first, then combine related ideas with accurate conjunctions. Check subject–verb agreement, articles and full stops during revision.

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