Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.5 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-11-12

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.5)

In present time, globalization is massively increases because of high use of internet and participation in other things. Individuals assumes that increased meetups between countries through globalization is a good thing. I agree with this opinion. The reason is that it encourages nation to share cultural traditions. Global peace can be attain easily. As it can resolve conflict by negotiations.

Intraction between different countries can increase the coordination between the residents. People can share their culture via internet. It is best form to explore a country. Now a days, many people are willing to attend the culture celebrations which will held in other nations. It is the best way to communicate. In modern days, the bull fight events are organize in spain. Different people from many countries visits Spain to attend their traditional events.

Globalization can end the decades old conflict through some peace talks. trade is the most aspect, now a days. Every nation needs another country for trade. It is the backbone of every economy in the world. If trade between countries get stop by any reason, the world will collapse in some time. If there is conflict b etween two nations, it can just solve by few meetings of official of that countries. In 2025, War between Pakistan and india, stopped after negociations held between them by their friendly countries.

To conclude, I would say that globaliztion is the best way to know about people living in other corners of the world. It is the only way to know about culutural heritage of history of another countries.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

You state a clear position—“I agree with this opinion”—and give two relevant reasons: cultural exchange and the possibility of resolving conflict through negotiation. The examples of visitors attending Spanish bullfighting events and countries relying on trade help connect your points to globalisation. However, the discussion remains only partly developed. The cultural paragraph mainly repeats that people can share or explore culture, while the claim that globalisation can end long-standing conflicts is asserted rather than explained. The Pakistan–India example is also presented without enough context to show how it supports the argument. To strengthen the response, discuss both the positive view and any limitations or opposing perspective, then explain each example and link it explicitly to your opinion.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.5

The response has a recognisable structure: an introduction, separate paragraphs on cultural exchange and trade or peace, and a conclusion. This gives the reader a basic route through your ideas. However, progression within paragraphs is sometimes unclear, and several short statements feel disconnected, such as “Global peace can be attain easily. As it can resolve conflict by negotiations.” The opening paragraph also introduces ideas that are not fully developed before the next point begins. Linking phrases such as “now a days” recur, while references like “It” do not always make clear which idea they refer to. Use topic sentences to establish each paragraph’s main claim, connect examples to that claim, and use a wider range of accurate transitions and clear referencing.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use relevant topic vocabulary, including “globalization,” “cultural traditions,” “trade,” “conflict,” and “negotiations,” so the reader can follow the general subject. There are also attempts at more specific expressions, such as “the backbone of every economy.” However, the range is limited and some word choices or collocations are inaccurate or repetitive, including “increased meetups between countries,” “best form to explore a country,” and “trade is the most aspect.” Spelling errors such as “Intraction,” “negociations,” and “globaliztion” also reduce accuracy. Build a bank of natural phrases for cultural exchange, international relations, and economic interdependence, and check spelling and word forms carefully.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt both simple statements and longer sentences with reasons or conditions, for example, “If trade between countries get stop by any reason, the world will collapse in some time.” This shows an effort to express cause and effect, but the range is limited and errors are frequent enough to make some sentences difficult to read. Examples include “globalization is massively increases,” “Individuals assumes,” and “Global peace can be attain,” where verb forms or agreement are incorrect. Sentence fragments also occur, as in “As it can resolve conflict by negotiations.” Practise accurate subject–verb agreement, verb forms, articles, and complete sentence construction. Once these are more reliable, use a wider variety of complex structures and proofread each sentence for a clear subject and main verb.

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