Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-11-14

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

In recent era services related to network, air travel, trade and popular culture and globalization has rapidly increased. Here some people believe that this is good thing. I agree with this proposal because globalization has some advantages such as it helps to boost economy of the countries and limited products are now available in every corner of the world.

First and foremost, it helps to increase the economy of the countries with the help of trade because a country can earn lot of money by trading its resources with other countries. In addition, there are many countries like Brazil and North Korea who have refused to trade with other countries have really poor economical condition. For instance, there are many countries who are working due to trade only like Saudi Arabia and the UAE who are exporting their oils and have an profitable airline business.

Secondly, it creates an availability of good at any corner of the world. There were many goods which the world which were not available in every country. Moreover, those goods use to be imported by an individual which costs a fortune but now with the help of globalization those goods are found at every shop. For example, designer bags of LV, GUCCI were mot in India and people have to go to any foreign country to purchase such item and now because of globalization it is available in the Indian market.

In conclusion, globalization not only helps in increasing the economy of the country but it also helps in creating availability of good in the market. Therefore, i agree with the proposal because of such advantages

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.0

Your position is clear: you agree that globalisation is beneficial, and you support it with two relevant points—economic gains from trade and wider access to goods. The examples of oil exports in Saudi Arabia and the UAE, and designer brands becoming available in India, help connect your ideas to real situations. However, the discussion is somewhat one-sided: you explain the benefits but do not meaningfully discuss why people hold this view or acknowledge any possible drawbacks. Some claims also need more careful development; for example, the comparison involving Brazil and North Korea is broad and not clearly linked to evidence about trade. Explain the cause-and-effect links more precisely and develop each example to show how it supports your opinion.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.5

The response has a clear overall structure: an introduction states your view, two body paragraphs present separate reasons, and a conclusion restates your position. Sequencing phrases such as “First and foremost,” “In addition,” and “Secondly” make the progression easy to follow. This meets the lower-band expectation of coherent organisation and shows some control of paragraphing. However, several links are mechanical, and some references are unclear—for instance, “those goods” and “such item” do not always identify the products precisely. The sentence beginning “There were many goods which the world…” is also difficult to follow, interrupting the flow of the second body paragraph. Use clearer topic sentences and refer back to specific ideas or examples rather than relying on repeated general terms.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.5

You use enough topic-related vocabulary to communicate your main points, including “globalization,” “trade,” “exporting,” “economy,” and “imported.” There are also attempts at more specific language, such as “profitable airline business” and “designer bags.” However, word choice and collocation are often inaccurate or repetitive, which limits precision: “limited products” seems to mean a restricted range of goods, while “availability of good” is unclear and should refer to goods or products. Phrases such as “economical condition” and “earn lot of money” are also not natural in this context. Build a more accurate range of expressions for trade and consumer access, and check spelling and word forms, including “mot” and “use to.”

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.5

You attempt both simple and complex sentences, including clauses introduced by “because,” “which,” and “who,” and the overall meaning is generally understandable. However, some sentence structures are faulty or incomplete, such as the opening sentence, which does not form a clear grammatical statement, and “There were many goods which the world which were not available…,” where the clause structure breaks down. There are also errors in articles, agreement, and verb forms: “a good thing,” “a country can earn lot,” “those goods use to be imported,” and “it is available” after a plural reference. These errors sometimes make the reader pause. Practise building accurate complex sentences and check each sentence for a clear subject, verb, and consistent singular or plural reference.

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