Band 6.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 6.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-11-14

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 6.0)

Globalization has increased recently because of the use of internet, flights, business and also through well liked cultures. Many people have the belief that this exchange between the different nations through globaliation is a good thing, whereas some think the opposite is true.

I am of the believe that globalization has actually increased over the years and is a very positive thing, that is leading the world to prospersity. The whole world can be thought of being under an umbrella and can inspire each other through their unique cultures. Through this interaction, many good things are adopted. Foe exmple, Bngldesh is country having a great agricultural industry. We have a very fertile soil where the production of various types of fruits nd vegetbles is possible. Through globaliation, Drgon fruit, which is a non native fruit to bngladesh, anad was only avilble via export, is now readily vilble, which is grown by farmers now. The framers from Bngldesh learnt it from Jpn, nd it ws only possible due to globlization.

Secondly, it has taught people better communication. More foreigners are trvelling to different countries and also influencing the country they re visiting. For exmple, christmas was not widely celebrated in Bangladesh, but now they celebrate it. It is not only seen s a religious ritual, rather as a celebratory occasion. While this, the foreigners also crry a part of Bngldesh with them along with the good memories.

Overall, eventhough there may be some drawbacks to globlization, I think the benefits are much heavier and is leading to a better world for the gfenerations to come.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.0

You discuss the view that globalisation is beneficial and make your own position clear: you believe its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. The examples about dragon fruit being adopted by Bangladeshi farmers and Christmas becoming more widely celebrated are relevant and help illustrate cultural and practical exchange. However, the discussion is unevenly developed. The first example explains a specific change, while the point about communication is asserted rather than clearly explained, and the Christmas example focuses more on celebration than on how global interaction improves communication. The drawbacks are acknowledged only briefly in the conclusion, without an example or explanation. Develop each main point with a clear cause-and-effect explanation and address the opposing view more fully.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.5

The response has a clear overall structure: an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion. Sequencing phrases such as “Secondly” and “Overall” help readers follow the main stages, and each body paragraph has a discernible focus. This meets the lower-band expectation of coherent organisation and shows some movement towards more flexible progression. However, links between ideas are occasionally unclear or mechanical. For instance, “While this, the foreigners also carry a part of Bangladesh with them” does not clearly connect to the preceding point, and the relationship between communication and the Christmas example needs to be made explicit. Use referencing and transitions that show precisely how each example supports the paragraph’s main claim, and ensure each paragraph develops one connected line of reasoning.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use some topic-relevant vocabulary, including “globalisation,” “interaction,” “agricultural industry,” “fertile soil” and “adopted,” which allows you to communicate the main ideas. There are also attempts at less common expressions, such as “under an umbrella” and “drawbacks.” However, the range and control are limited by repeated general wording and numerous spelling errors, including “globaliation,” “avilble” and “prospersity.” Some word choices are also unnatural or imprecise, such as “the benefits are much heavier” and “taught people better communication.” These errors can make the reader pause, even when the intended meaning is recoverable. Build a more accurate range of collocations for discussing cultural and economic exchange, and proofread spelling carefully.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.5

You attempt both simple and more complex sentence forms, including a relative clause in “Dragon fruit, which is a non native fruit to Bangladesh,” and a contrast structure beginning “Even though there may be some drawbacks.” The main message is generally understandable, but some grammatical errors remain. Examples include “I am of the believe,” where the noun form is needed, “a country having,” which lacks a clear article and natural clause structure, and “the benefits are much heavier and is leading,” where the subject and verb do not agree. Sentence boundaries and punctuation are also inconsistent, particularly in the long dragon-fruit example. Aim for accurate subject–verb agreement, articles and complete sentence structures, then check punctuation when combining clauses.

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