Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-08-25

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

In the statement many people think that the internet is increasing more rapidly and many people said, the increasing of internet have good impact on interaction and globalization.

Well here, the main point is that the internet can increased rapidly. First of all, the by improvement in internet people have many reliefs and internet makes their lives more easy and reliable. Because through internet or with the help of internet, the foreigner's are know about the beauty of the nature and beauty of our traditions and culture. Internet also improve the trading in global market. Secondly in recent year the technology have more advanced and most of the people take help from it. Internet have fast services where a man take some hours for many type of files, at that through the internet we done it with in few milli seconds.

Here we discuses the people who say that instead of internet the interaction can more increased by the meet the people to face to face. According of them the global areas and nations can interact with people's behavior traditions and their culture activities have more good impact. Now a days the believe that the people can more interact on nations and globalization is to rough. But that point is not so bad.

At last after discussing the both, in my point of view the internet is the best and it also helps to increased the the whole type of concepts like trading cutler and traditions belongs to our country.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0

The response addresses the prompt by discussing the impact of globalisation and the internet, but the development is limited. While you state your opinion at the end, the arguments are underdeveloped and lack specific examples. For instance, you mention 'trading in global market' and 'beauty of traditions' without explaining how these are facilitated by globalisation or why they are beneficial. The discussion of the opposing view is vague, making it difficult for the reader to follow your reasoning. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence followed by detailed explanations and concrete examples that directly support your position.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0

The essay is divided into paragraphs, but the logical progression is weak. Transitions like 'First of all' and 'Secondly' are used, but the internal flow within paragraphs is disjointed. For example, the transition from discussing internet speed to the opposing view about face-to-face interaction is abrupt and lacks a clear connecting thought. Furthermore, the use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate, such as 'At that through the internet we done it', which obscures the relationship between ideas. Improving the use of linking words and ensuring each sentence builds logically upon the previous one will significantly enhance the coherence of your writing.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.0

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. You frequently use basic words like 'internet', 'people', and 'good', which restricts your ability to express complex ideas. There are also issues with word choice and collocation, such as 'the increasing of internet have good impact' and 'globalization is to rough'. These errors occasionally make your meaning unclear. To reach a higher band, you should aim to use a wider range of vocabulary, including topic-specific collocations related to globalisation, technology, and international relations. Focus on learning how words are used in context rather than just memorising isolated terms.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that often impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'internet have fast services'), incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'internet can increased'), and sentence structure (e.g., 'the foreigner's are know about'). The range of structures is limited, consisting mostly of simple sentences with errors in basic syntax. To improve, you need to focus on mastering fundamental grammar rules, particularly verb forms and pluralisation. Practising the construction of complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'although', 'because', 'which') will also help you demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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