Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-08-27

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

So, In the recent years the globalisation through many resourses like internet , by doing bussienes with differnet countries and by air travel has rapidly increased and according to many peoples point of view it is a good thing that interaction ]s between countries is benificial for both countries.

Deffinetly, the world becomes a global village and the trade between countries is increasing rapidly and it is very benificial for the development of the country. Many countries are trading for differsnt products of eating and different industrial products which are not produced in their country.The main source of globalisation is internet many people order thing from the whole world which are deliverd to their hime and they no ti waste their time to shop it from local markets and from bazars.Many peoples travel from one country to other countries for different purposes for the improvment of their bussienes and for many purposes for whom thier interactions with different peoples increases the development of their countries and they leave a good image which plays important role in globalisation.

Once i also travelled to visit baku it was my first trip when i have to fly the peoples of baku are very friendly and the are very concious about their guests they give their all attentions to their guests and the person who visits their always dreams to visit their again and the saftey of the visitor is their first priorityso my experience is very outclass.

In my opinion, interactions between different nations is very excellent thing and i think it is very necassary for globalisation.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0

The response addresses the prompt by discussing the benefits of globalisation, but the development is quite limited. While you mention trade, the internet, and travel, the ideas are not fully explored or supported with sophisticated reasoning. The personal anecdote about Baku is somewhat tangential and does not effectively contribute to a broader argument about the global impacts of globalisation. To improve, you should focus on providing more analytical depth regarding the economic or cultural implications of increased interaction between nations. Your position is clear, but the overall development of the argument remains superficial, which limits the score for this criterion.

Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0

The essay lacks a clear structure. Paragraphing is inconsistent, and the transition between ideas is often abrupt. There is a lack of cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs effectively; for example, the jump from trade to the internet and then to personal travel feels disjointed. The use of referencing is also weak, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logical progression of your argument. To reach a higher band, you should use a wider range of linking words (e.g., 'furthermore', 'consequently', 'in contrast') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single, well-developed central idea.

Lexical Resource — Band 5.0

Your vocabulary is quite basic and repetitive, relying on simple terms like 'good thing', 'different', and 'purposes'. There are frequent spelling errors such as 'resourses', 'bussienes', 'differsnt', 'hime', and 'necassary', which occasionally impede the flow of reading. While you attempt to use some topic-specific vocabulary, the range is limited and lacks the precision required for a higher band. To improve, focus on learning collocations and more academic synonyms for common words. Expanding your vocabulary to include more precise terminology related to international relations and economics would significantly enhance your writing.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that affect readability. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the world becomes', 'peoples travel'), incorrect article usage, and run-on sentences. Punctuation is also problematic, with missing spaces after commas and periods. Your sentence structures are mostly simple, with few attempts at complex grammatical forms. To improve, you should focus on mastering basic sentence construction, including correct verb tenses and punctuation. Practising the use of complex sentences—such as using relative clauses or conditional structures—will help you demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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