Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-09-02
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
In recent years, through the internet, air travel trade and popular culture,globalisation has rapidly increased.Many people believe that incrfeased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good factor.I'll discuss the both views.
On the one hand, from my perspective nowsaday internet play a significant role in our life.The things are very easier we find alot of things through the website.For Example,through the internet we have alot of benefits through website we can book air travel ticket or hotels.However,the globalistaion has rise significantly beacuse by using internet things are getting more easier thats a positive sign of present year.Now we find everything more easier on every site thats a really change over the past years.
On the another hand,now i'll discuss the negative views if the internet are not in the city thats really play a negative role in our life.Furthermore,we find more difficulties in every thing.For example,we didn't book any ticket,resturents and air travel so than we faces fustrating things.Consequently,the decade of recent years improves very increasingly.Furthermore,internet is very important thing thats play a postive sign in every type of work like the way offices work,international trade and many more.Every nations has rise up significantly because globalisation nows play a positive role every country has rise up in every years like the way in technology, websites, trading factor like the way now we read the newspaper on the site that really impressive.In addition,without internet the interaction between people are very ackward because peoples talk through internet with thge applications of Whatsapp,Instagram,Messenger and many more without internet nowsaday the things done not quickly.
In conclusion,although globalisation can create some challenges, I believe that the increase interaction between nations is alargely positive development.Internet promotes cultural understanding,strength intrernational trade where peoples connect toghether through internets.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses the prompt by discussing globalisation and providing an opinion. However, the development of ideas is limited. The essay focuses heavily on the internet as a proxy for globalisation rather than exploring the broader implications of trade, culture, and international interaction mentioned in the prompt. The arguments are repetitive, and the 'negative' view is not clearly articulated, as the paragraph focuses more on the absence of technology than on the drawbacks of globalisation itself. To improve, you should focus on developing distinct, well-supported arguments that directly address the prompt's core themes.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is organised into paragraphs, but the logical progression is weak. The use of cohesive devices is often mechanical or inaccurate, such as the repetitive use of 'Furthermore' and 'For example'. Referencing is sometimes unclear, and the transition between ideas feels disjointed. While there is an attempt to use linking words, they are often used incorrectly or in a way that does not enhance the flow of the argument. Improving the use of cohesive devices and ensuring each paragraph has a clear, singular focus would significantly improve the coherence of your writing.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. You frequently use basic terms like 'things', 'good', and 'easier' rather than more precise academic alternatives. There are also numerous spelling errors, such as 'nowsaday', 'incrfeased', 'globalistaion', and 'resturents'. The range of vocabulary is insufficient to express complex ideas clearly. To reach a higher band, you should focus on learning topic-specific collocations related to globalisation and international relations, and pay closer attention to the spelling of common academic words.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are consistent issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'internet play', 'internet are not'), article usage, and sentence structure. Complex sentence structures are attempted but are often faulty, leading to run-on sentences or fragmented thoughts. Punctuation is also inconsistent, with missing spaces after commas and periods. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence construction, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for punctuation errors before finalising your work.
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