Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-09-07
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
By having a cousoury glance, we come to know that in recent year, the globalisation is increasing at a higher speed form past and people think that the interaction with new countries is a good thing for both countries
So, from my point of view. I strongly agree with that to make new relation with other countries and to increase the trade with other native countries. As it give a strong impact on the personal, poltical and professional relation. as well as economic sector of a country also. There are many sector on which the globalisation is depend, like export, import and other trades and by increasing globalisation there are many banifit for a country like: to have a better globel support.
in conclusion, increase in globalisation is good thing for a country. Because it will give a better economical and poltical support to a country.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 4.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 5.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 4.0
The response fails to meet the minimum word count requirement of 250 words, reaching only 146 words. This significantly impacts the development of ideas. While you state your position clearly in the second paragraph, the arguments remain superficial. You mention 'personal, political and professional relations' and 'economic sectors' as benefits, but these points are not supported by specific examples or detailed explanations as required by the prompt. To achieve a higher band, you must expand your arguments with concrete evidence and ensure the essay is of sufficient length to allow for a full discussion of the topic.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The essay is divided into three very short paragraphs, which is insufficient for a discursive essay. While there is a basic attempt at logical progression, the lack of development makes the structure feel fragmented. Cohesive devices are used, such as 'in conclusion' and 'as well as', but they are often used incorrectly or in a mechanical way. For example, the transition 'So, from my point of view' is informal and poorly integrated. To improve, you should focus on using a wider range of linking words and ensuring that each paragraph contains a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors, such as 'cousoury' (cursory), 'banifit' (benefit), 'globel' (global), and 'poltical' (political). The range of vocabulary is insufficient to discuss the topic of globalisation with any precision. You rely on basic terms and struggle to express complex ideas effectively. To improve, you should work on learning topic-specific vocabulary related to international relations and economics, and pay closer attention to the spelling of common words. Using more precise synonyms will help you convey your ideas more clearly and professionally.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 5.0
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are issues with article usage ('the globalisation'), subject-verb agreement ('globalisation is depend'), and sentence structure. Many sentences are fragmented or lack proper punctuation, such as the run-on sentence starting with 'As it give a strong impact'. The range of structures is very limited, consisting mostly of simple sentences. To improve, you need to focus on mastering basic sentence construction, including correct verb tenses and pluralisation, before attempting more complex grammatical structures. Proofreading for basic errors is essential.
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