Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer
Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-09-14
IELTS Writing Task 2 question
In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Student answer (Band 5.0)
Over the past few years, through the online plateform, air transpotation, trade and popular culture, internationalisation has rapidly increased. A large amount of people belive that the increased interacton between nations through Globle integration is a good thing.
In my opinion, globalisation may positive impack on our nations because talk about india, many years before there is no interection between international countries their are mainly no more globalisation before so many decades but nowdays through the online plateform or air transport or Globle trade india are all over the world.
So in my opinion, internationalisaton has make a positive impack on our country to move forward and in future also make a good relation with the globle coubties is mainly effective for our counties.
In this time duration, there are so many countries are globalising in different ways, moreover if any difficult situation we can also ask for help or any need to other counties as well so that's why always make a good relation with other counties.
In conclusion, over so many past year throught the internat and the globle trade and the popular culture and the globalisation has repidly increase in all over the world. so that's why so many people are thinking that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing and a positive impack in our country. so many people are thinking that the positive impack for our country because of the internationalisation and more communication with other countries.
AI examiner evaluation
| Criterion | Band |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement / Task Response | 5.0 |
| Coherence and Cohesion | 5.0 |
| Lexical Resource | 5.0 |
| Grammatical Range and Accuracy | 4.0 |
| Overall | 5.0 |
Task Achievement / Task Response — Band 5.0
The response addresses the prompt by discussing globalisation and offering an opinion, but it falls short of the 250-word minimum requirement, containing only 246 words. Consequently, a penalty must be applied to Task Achievement. Furthermore, the ideas are repetitive and underdeveloped. For instance, the student repeatedly mentions India and online platforms across multiple paragraphs without expanding significantly on broader global economic or cultural implications. The position is stated, but the support lacks depth and structure, aligning the response with Band 5.
Coherence and Cohesion — Band 5.0
The response is organized into paragraphs, though some paragraphs are extremely brief or repetitive, such as the conclusion which merely restates previous points using similar phrasing. Logical progression is weak because arguments circle back to the same basic ideas about India and online platforms without clear development. Cohesive devices are used, but they tend to be basic or repetitive (e.g., 'In my opinion', 'So in my opinion', 'In conclusion'). Referencing is sometimes unclear, impacting the overall flow. These characteristics fit the descriptors for Band 5.
Lexical Resource — Band 5.0
The vocabulary used is generally basic and repetitive, with noticeable spelling and word choice errors throughout the text. Examples of misspellings and awkward phrasing include 'plateform' instead of platform, 'transpotation' instead of transportation, 'belive' instead of believe, 'interacton' instead of interaction, 'Globle' instead of global, 'impack' instead of impact, 'coubties' instead of countries, and 'repidly' instead of rapidly. These errors occasionally impede communication and restrict the lexical range to a limited, repetitive repertoire, corresponding to Band 4.5, rounded to 5.0 for adequate task coverage.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy — Band 4.0
The essay displays a very limited range of grammatical structures, relying heavily on simple sentences or awkward complex structures that frequently contain errors. Examples of grammatical inaccuracies include 'there is no interection between international countries their are mainly no more globalisation before' and 'if any difficult situation we can also ask for help'. Punctuation is basic, and frequent errors in tense, subject-verb agreement, and clause structure distort meaning at times. This performance reflects the criteria for Band 4.0.
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