Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-10-09

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

In recent years people are started interacting with globally trough internet , by travelling, trading, exploring popular culture

yes, i believe that the incresed interaction between nations throught globalisation is good thing because exploring the new culture, people, and places will help humans to understanding life in different ways and travelling and trading will help the relations between the countrys to get strong

In recent year people are stared talking to other country or state people by using internet and started travelling new places; for example let us consider a person who don’t talk to others through internet or don’t travel he will stay in his city and work there the amount of information shared between to that person will be limited and he don’t know what world is doing how it is getting better but when it comes to the person who talk to the new people through internet and he travels new places he will get know there culture how other people think, how there surroundings help them to grow or influenced them, we can get self development by talking to other or traveling. this is one kind of good thing by globalisation.

trading help to build the relations between counties, by doing business around the countries the world will stop wars and focusing on there countrys development because when we start business around the world new employment will crete and human development will boosted and wars will reduced. this other kind good thing for globalisations

conclusion, throght the intrenet ,air travel, trading and exploring popular culture will lead the good relations between country’s

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

You give a clear overall view that globalisation is beneficial, and you discuss two relevant reasons: cultural exchange and stronger trade relationships. The example contrasting someone who stays in one city with someone who travels or communicates online helps explain how interaction can broaden understanding. However, the discussion remains only partly developed: the claims that trade will stop wars and create employment are asserted rather than supported with a specific explanation or example. The task asks you to discuss the view as well as give your opinion; your response mainly supports the positive view and does not consider why some people might disagree. Develop each reason with a concrete example and briefly acknowledge a possible drawback to address the task more fully.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

Your response has a basic overall structure: an opening position, separate paragraphs about cultural exchange and trade, and a concluding statement. This helps the reader identify your main points. However, progression within paragraphs is sometimes difficult to follow, particularly in the long example beginning “let us consider a person,” where several ideas are joined together without clear sentence boundaries. Connections between points are also repetitive, with “this is one kind of good thing” and “this other kind good thing” doing much of the linking. Use shorter, clearly organised sentences and more precise links such as “For example,” “As a result,” and “In addition.” A conclusion that restates your two reasons and opinion would also create a clearer sense of completion.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use vocabulary relevant to the topic, including “globalisation,” “popular culture,” “trading,” “employment,” and “self development.” These terms allow you to communicate the main ideas, but the range is limited and several expressions are repeated or imprecise. Phrases such as “get strong” for relationships, “get know there culture,” and “the world will stop wars” are not natural or clear in this context. Spelling errors, including “incresed,” “throught,” and “countrys,” are noticeable and sometimes make reading less smooth. Build a wider set of accurate collocations for cultural exchange and international trade, and check spelling and word forms carefully.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt both simple statements and longer sentences with reasons and examples, but control is inconsistent. Many sentences contain errors that can make the reader pause, as in “people are started interacting” and “he don’t know what world is doing.” There are recurring problems with verb forms, subject–verb agreement, articles, and plural forms. The long sentence beginning “for example let us consider” also joins several clauses without appropriate punctuation, making its structure hard to follow. Practise forming accurate present-tense sentences first, then connect them with conjunctions while keeping each sentence manageable. For example, use “people have started interacting” and “he does not know what the rest of the world is doing.”

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