Band 5.5 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.5 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-10-11

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.5)

In recent years, with the help of internat,air travel, trade and famous culture, globalisation has rapidly esclated. Many people share their view that the increased interation between countrirs through globalisation is an excellent thing. I largely agree with this view due to the fact that everyone in the world should be connected through internat with each to cope major international challanges.

On the onehand, Interation between different culture is a benefial things in regard to help transport goods and positive trade between countries with the help of online advertisement. Large companies can work togeather with eachother in manufacturing daily life essantial which can be essantial for daily life and single nation can use products of another nation with the help of online platforms which sales these products For an instance, arabic watch campany colabrated with finland tech designers and they both lauched a traditional watches along with modern design and advertised on social media and through that people of both country shared their culture with just a watch which both countries people can use now.

On the otherhand, In the past time there are a lot of countries who hate other nation without any reason and they mostly reply on a myths, but when world become golbal village people get to know about the reality that what the other countries are, and because of internat, many governments want to make projects togeather unlike pasr, for example; during world war 2 people in Europe hate each other due to false news which was spread by their enemies but curently, even they have their borders open and this is due to internet.

From my prespective, i strongly agree that internet as a great influence on making different culture connected unlike in the pastwhere they trust mostly on myths

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 6.0

You address both the general benefits of international interaction and your own position, which is clear in the opening and closing: you “largely agree” and later “strongly agree.” The examples about a cross-country watch collaboration and European relations also make the discussion relevant. However, the first main idea focuses mainly on trade and a product, while the second makes a broad claim about past hostility and present cooperation without explaining the link in enough detail. The World War II example is also not clearly connected to the claim that internet access has improved relations. Develop each reason with a clearer explanation of how globalisation produces the stated benefit, and use examples that directly support that explanation.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 6.0

The response has a recognisable structure: an introduction, two contrasting body paragraphs beginning “On the one hand” and “On the other hand,” and a concluding opinion. This gives the reader an overall route through your discussion. However, some connections are mechanical or unclear. For example, the long sentence about the watch company moves from manufacturing to online sales and cultural exchange without clear sentence boundaries, and “through that” has an uncertain reference. The second body paragraph also shifts from myths to government projects and then to World War II without sufficiently showing how these points connect. Use shorter, clearly punctuated sentences, and make each paragraph develop one central idea in a logical sequence.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You attempt vocabulary relevant to the topic, including “international challenges,” “manufacturing,” “advertised,” and “traditional watches,” and you use some topic-related phrases such as “global village.” However, spelling and word-choice errors are noticeable and sometimes make the reader pause, as in “internat,” “esclated,” “interation,” and “essantial.” Some combinations are also unnatural, including “famous culture,” “positive trade,” and “a great influence on making different culture connected.” Aim for accurate, natural collocations and check spelling carefully. Building a small set of reliable expressions for discussing cultural exchange, trade, and international cooperation would help you express your ideas more precisely without relying on repeated or unclear wording.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt both simple and complex sentence forms, including clauses introduced by “when,” “because,” and “that,” and your main position is generally understandable. However, some sentence structures are difficult to follow, particularly the long sentence beginning “Large companies can work together,” which contains several ideas joined without clear punctuation. There are also errors in agreement, articles, and verb forms, such as “different culture is,” “a benefial things,” and “when world become.” Capitalisation and punctuation are inconsistent, including capital letters after “On the one hand” and missing sentence boundaries. Practise accurate subject–verb agreement and article use, and divide complex ideas into complete, well-punctuated sentences.

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