Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-10-12

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

internet has made the world global village.internet has made communication really beneficial in terms of convience and accessible. every invididual has granted his freedom of speech over the internet. through this trend globalisation gain popularity and it removes the barrier between invididual to communicate with numerious nationality furthermore it demostrate enormous culture in terms of ethic value and emotionally so, more invididual shows interset in different culture.

numerious people given thier suggestion that interaction with different invididual of different nations is comfortable with globisation. i conour this point according to my prospective internet, air travels,culture has played a crucial role in broughting invididuals closer.so, on everyone has its own freedom of expression. it also helps the young one to develope greate sense of hummor in the phase of adolsense.

globalisation has created humungous opportunity in field of jobs,carrer path,technologyand medical. as it creates sense of communication among invididual so all the barrier are demolished. it is major cause of development and ecconmic growth in every sector of a nation

as it brought people together so everyone knows other invididual interset and thier way of life

technology has boast up due to convenience and direct approch.

I like to conclude, that there are positive impact of globalistation in every sector of life. As, it continue to connect numerious invididual all over globe to create set of opportunity and growth in every aspect linked throuhh culture,emotions and interset. as it brought the world to one stage its creates a sense of equality among everyone.

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.0

You give a clear overall view that globalisation is positive, especially in the conclusion, and you mention relevant areas such as communication, employment, technology, medicine and cultural exchange. However, the task is only partially addressed because the discussion remains broad and the reasons are not sufficiently explained or supported with specific examples. For instance, you say globalisation creates “opportunity in field of jobs” and contributes to “economic growth,” but do not show how interaction between nations produces these benefits. The point about young people developing a “sense of humour” is also unclear and not connected convincingly to the question. State your position clearly in the introduction, then develop two or three relevant arguments with concrete examples.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 4.5

There is some organisation: the response moves from communication and culture to economic opportunities, then ends with a conclusion that restates your positive view. However, the progression between ideas is not consistently clear, and several points are repeated rather than developed. For example, the ideas that globalisation brings people closer and removes barriers appear in multiple paragraphs without adding a distinct explanation. Linking words such as “furthermore,” “so,” and “as” are used, but sometimes the relationship between clauses is unclear. Paragraphing is also limited, with several separate ideas crowded together. Give each paragraph one main point, use topic sentences, and connect examples directly to the claim they support.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You attempt vocabulary relevant to the topic, including “globalisation,” “freedom of speech,” “economic growth,” and “sense of equality.” This gives you some useful range, but the overall vocabulary is limited and repeated, particularly “individual,” “barrier,” and “opportunity.” Frequent spelling errors and inaccurate word choices can make meaning difficult to follow, as in “invididual,” “numerious,” “conour,” and “technologyand.” Some combinations are also unnatural, such as “globalisation gain popularity” and “technology has boast up.” Build accuracy by checking spelling and learning common collocations for this topic. More precise wording would help you explain benefits and cultural interaction clearly rather than relying on broad claims.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

You attempt to connect ideas in longer sentences, for example with “furthermore” and “as,” but the range of sentence structures is limited and these attempts are often faulty. Errors in verb forms and agreement occur throughout: “globalisation gain popularity,” “all the barrier are demolished,” and “it also helps the young one to develope” do not show reliable control. Articles, plurals and sentence boundaries are also inconsistent, as in “internet has made the world global village” and the run-on sequence beginning “as it creates sense of communication.” These errors sometimes make relationships between ideas hard to understand. Practise accurate simple sentences first, then combine them using subordinate clauses, checking subject–verb agreement, articles and punctuation.

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