Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

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IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

It is very popular topic in our society now a days. In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a postive point.

Firstly through the internet many people interact with different people all over the world they get idea between other cultures. With the help of internet many developing cuntries hires wokforce from underdevloping countries beacuse they get cheaper labour from that country from this they also shared there cultureand ideas.For instance i have been working in uk based accountancy firm where i perpare financial statement of uk clients.

Secondly through air travel people from all over the world visit to different countries. Eourpean contries vist eastren countries and eastren countries. They share culture,Values, language and there religion. Muslim vist to saudia every year to perform worship. Moreover through air travel higher authorties from countries meet each other in one country to build there relationship and trade between them.

Lastly through music and entertainment globilazation has rapidly increased people listen different music on internet of different language. People also watch movies on internet of different culture. Moreover they also watch different content creator vidoes on socila media platform.

In my opinion i have love globalisation i want people to communicate eacother and trade

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 4.5

You address the topic by discussing interaction through the internet, air travel, and entertainment, and you state a positive view in the opening and conclusion. However, the response contains 194 words, so it is 56 words below the 250-word minimum; 29 copied words from the prompt were not counted. This limits how fully you can explain your ideas. Several points are only briefly asserted: for example, the accountancy-firm example is relevant but its benefits are not explained, and the travel paragraph repeats that people share culture without showing the effects. Your final opinion, “i have love globalisation,” is also unclear and unsupported. Develop each reason with a specific explanation or example, and state your position clearly throughout.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

The response has a recognisable structure: an introduction, three body paragraphs signalled by “Firstly,” “Secondly,” and “Lastly,” and a concluding opinion. These markers help readers identify the main topics. However, progression within paragraphs is often weak because ideas are placed next to one another without clear explanation of how they connect. For instance, the internet paragraph moves from cultural exchange to hiring workers and then to your job, but does not explain the relationship between these points. Some linking is repetitive, particularly the repeated use of “Moreover” and “also.” The conclusion is too brief to bring the discussion together. Organise each paragraph around one main reason, then connect its example explicitly to your argument.

Lexical Resource: Band 5.0

You use some relevant topic vocabulary, including “globalisation,” “interaction,” “developing countries,” “labour,” “culture,” and “trade,” so the reader can follow the general subject. However, the range is limited and several phrases are imprecise or unnatural, such as “a positive point,” “get idea between other cultures,” and “build there relationship.” Frequent spelling errors—including “globilazation,” “Eourpean,” and “socila media”—also make the writing less clear and reduce the accuracy of your word choices. Aim for precise collocations and check spelling carefully. For example, describe people as “gaining insight into other cultures” and say that travel can “strengthen diplomatic and trade relations.”

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 4.5

You attempt some longer sentences, such as the sentence beginning “With the help of internet,” and use basic sequencing structures to present your points. However, the range of sentence forms is limited, and errors are frequent enough to make parts difficult to read. Examples include missing articles in “It is very popular topic,” subject–verb agreement in “many developing countries hires,” and unclear sentence boundaries where several ideas run together. The final sentence, “In my opinion i have love globalisation i want people to communicate eacother and trade,” contains multiple clauses without appropriate punctuation and does not express the intended meaning clearly. Practise accurate simple sentences first, then combine related ideas using controlled conjunctions and correct punctuation.

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