Band 5.0 IELTS Writing Task 2 Model Answer

Overall Band Score: 5.0 · IELTS Momentum Workout · 2026-10-30

IELTS Writing Task 2 question

In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Student answer (Band 5.0)

yes,in recent year its become popular in word almost all country wanted to makes good relations with other countries with air travel they gave permision to theirs peoples to vist certain country that makes good relations with it and also many country in world tried to get more trade with certains countries they also spread their cultures in own cities

for example, whe have good relation with china and turkey we makes multiples deals and trade with them and if anyone is in trouble the other is ready for their help such as recently our war started with our neighbour country india when it started turkey and china is ready for help us in any case turkey send their fighteer jeets which gives benifits us we dominated the war so if we have goos relationsips we also get advantage.

in my opionin intraction between two nation is good for the world and also for their people they gets cheap product which are overall expensive product in world and the economies of sale is high as compared to others

Another advantage of it ,culture diffusion people of one country easy get access of other nation such as visa and crossing boarder they also import product,cars and other machines from other country in a cheap rate. such nation can devolpe good opportunity for jobs, marking of products good relation between two nations is good and symbol of peace

in conculsion, intraction between diffrents countries is very important and compulsary for each nation in world

AI examiner evaluation

Task Achievement / Task Response: Band 5.5

You give a clear overall view that interaction between nations is beneficial, and you offer relevant reasons, including trade, access to products, cultural exchange and support between countries. The example involving China, Turkey and India also attempts to show how international relationships can have practical effects. However, the discussion is only partly developed: the example is difficult to follow and does not clearly explain how it demonstrates globalisation, while claims such as “the economies of sale is high” are not explained. The task asks you to discuss the view as well as give your opinion; most of the response supports the positive side, with little consideration of possible drawbacks or of why others might disagree. Develop each reason with a clearer explanation or example.

Coherence and Cohesion: Band 5.0

There is some organisation: the response begins with general points, gives an example, adds further advantages and ends with a conclusion. Paragraph breaks also help separate parts of the discussion. However, the progression between ideas is not consistently clear, and several points are crowded into long sentences, particularly the account of the conflict and the final paragraph about culture, imports and jobs. Linking phrases such as “for example,” “in my opinion” and “in conclusion” are useful, but connections between individual claims are often missing or repetitive. Some references, including “it” and “such nation,” are unclear. Use one main idea per paragraph, explain how each example supports it, and make references explicit.

Lexical Resource: Band 4.5

You attempt vocabulary relevant to the topic, including “trade,” “culture diffusion,” “relations,” “economies” and “opportunity for jobs.” These choices show that you can communicate several relevant ideas. However, the range is limited and some expressions are repeated, especially “good relations” and “other country.” Frequent spelling errors and inaccurate word forms, such as “opionin,” “diffrents” and “devolpe,” make the writing harder to read. Some combinations are also unnatural or unclear, for example “economies of sale” and “dominated the war.” Build a more precise set of topic vocabulary and check spelling and collocations; for instance, use “economic benefits” or “employment opportunities” where appropriate.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy: Band 5.0

You attempt to connect ideas using longer sentences and clauses, and the reader can generally identify your main position. However, the range of sentence structures is limited, and attempts to combine several ideas often produce faulty sentences. For example, “we makes multiples deals” has incorrect subject–verb agreement, while “they gets cheap product” has agreement and number errors. Articles and sentence boundaries are also frequently missing, as in the opening run-on sentence. These errors sometimes make relationships between ideas difficult to understand. Practise forming accurate simple sentences first, then join them with conjunctions or relative clauses. Check verb agreement, plural forms, articles and full stops during revision.

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